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ruh roh

Jun 26, 2009 23:30

More fan fiction! Always more. What is happening. DSRK, sort of NaruRai, circa SA. I think.

( obv Gouto can hear you when you talk about naked ladies )

just pooling some information, my beautiful dream, a fanfiction!, dsrk

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canis_m June 27 2009, 14:22:11 UTC

I love it ohgod so SA, look at them, still so awkward with each other yessss

"Toots" alakjsdlfksjdlfkjl; you actually did it, also G sashaying...!

Thank you for the Orthrus cameo, ORTHRUS GOOD, I don't know why but demons speaking in capslock never gets old.

Does this work have a title.

motorbike June 27 2009, 14:24:38 UTC

My masterpiece has no title I think I am working my way up to titles

motorbike June 27 2009, 14:26:22 UTC

Fact though, Orthrus is probs my favorite demon, dk why, just is

canis_m June 27 2009, 14:49:41 UTC

Orthrus tells it like it is. I runno if I could pick a favorite though. You know what makes me really sad is that there is no Unicorn in DSRK like there is in Persona. I wanted to give Raidou a pony

Btw nice use of "sir" in the above, sir

Titles are hard. G-ganbare, also pls rite moar

I think "sir" is so hot, why is that. motorbike June 27 2009, 14:54:47 UTC

Yeah but when I got the flying dragon I figured gift horses etc.

I am going to treat this like I treat paintings, everything is Untitled With Cat

o rite motorbike June 27 2009, 17:02:42 UTC

and I actually debated for a bit whether or not Narumi would really part with a bonus. of money. this early on. But then I realized he would want to start off on the right foot, and since he wouldn't know what R likes besides summoning demons (nothing? beej?), in a v. male way he would give R something N likes. And when R goes SIGHHHH even at that N would be like ;A; NOT WORKING SEDUCE HARDER

you think "sir" is hot because it is, in fact, hot canis_m June 27 2009, 17:35:06 UTC

I bought it! And I like that when plan A falls through N immediately moves to plan B: dinner dates. R must be fed, he is a growing boy.

I am writing the attack of the demon squid fic btw, they are on a dinner date, Gouto is clawing N's ankles under the table

"untitled with cat" = best title ever

itt: dinner dates motorbike June 27 2009, 17:54:54 UTC

Clawing under the table yesssssssss omg write faster

Gouto is still my favorite character, man. I was also thinking maybe he'd call Raidou super pretty girl names, but the humor would be lost in translation.

canis_m June 28 2009, 00:46:26 UTC

Gouto is amazing, what you said @ amei re: really DSRK as a whole is his story--that is terrifyingly plausible. And it's so sad! I mean when you (generic you) first encounter him in the game you think "haha talking lolcat" or "tv trope: animal familiar" or w/e, and then the story invests him with all this character depth and long-term tragedy. Gaaah. I love that there's so much latent poignancy under the antics and lulz. Man you know Narumi's past is probably killer too. Granted, not a centuries-long epic like Gouto's but prolly N's whole family is dead because of something he did while still a covert op, or some shit.

motorbike June 28 2009, 03:43:07 UTC

That's what I love about the DSRK games, they are lol exactly until they are not, and there is practically no modulation between, which makes the Not parts surprisingly poignant. Like the case where you Kevorkian Narita's tru love because she has become a deformed abomination and he couldn't save her. !!! And then b-back to lol again ( ... )

canis_m June 28 2009, 13:05:31 UTC

Eventually R is going to somehow set G free. Like Aladdin and the genie. Somehow. I am convinced. I will cry and cry ( ... )

unpacking all this just sets my dorky heart aglowwww motorbike June 28 2009, 18:51:13 UTC

No idea what Y is except, like, this network of points and people all across AU Japan, connected to the Four Great Families. Super staunch Lawful Good alignment, their mission is noble and they get shit done man. Gouto's punishment could be self-imposed, yeah, but am dyingggg to know what happened because G does say it's "about the cruelest sentence you can come up with". Also I seem to recall a chick at Shin Sekai who has her own Gouto-douji -- man in the hat next to her -- so maybe it's just a standard punishment for fucking up. Not sure how come that guy is a guy while Gouto is a kitty. Bet that's a personal choice. Kitties can have it pretty sweet, idk ( ... )

Re: unpacking all this just sets my dorky heart aglowwww amei June 29 2009, 13:57:53 UTC

Not sure how come that guy is a guy while Gouto is a kitty.

iirc she said he was a cockroach before, until she told him to change. Maybe she squashed him and he got shuffled into a man's body.

Lord knows what happened to G after he uh spoilered spoilered spoilered in the first game.

motorbike June 29 2009, 19:23:35 UTC

He became a crow, right, but that's only 50% as cute so he turned back again!

motorbike June 28 2009, 18:57:19 UTC

Also speaking of national voices, how politically charged is SA, wow. I was actually surprised/let down that Abaddon dropped that course and went for a vague religious charge instead, which given the SMT standard wasn't nearly as incendiary. I really want to hear more about what women thought about the changing fashions, wah! I also love that Tae is a hero for so many girls still mired in tradition ♥

motorbike June 28 2009, 03:46:44 UTC

*PAWS. On his paws.

I want to write a story where Gouto gets a kitty girlfriend in the spring orz it will totally tap into all these themes

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