On the verbs and adjectives, done and done. I've been slowly reading the copy I have. When I say slowly I mean that I worked on the first page for a good ten or fifteen minutes. I hope you don't mind that it's taking me so long, but I've been rearranging (although not changing) words for phrasing purposes. I haven't done any more, because I wanted to show you tomorrow and see what you have to say about it. I really think the story is cool so far, and I can't wait for the Sayuki marathon.
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OP on the story itself is more valued than grammar advice at this particular time and moment...
Ah well I'll see you tomorrow
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