Title: Convenient Misfortunes
Author: Sunaina
Fandom: NewS
Main pairing: Koyama/Shigeaki OMG MASSUTEGO
Category: AU, Angst, Romance, Crack, Mystery
Rating: PG
Summary: It has been 2 years since the last time Kato talked to Koyama.
Chapter 1: RealizationChapter 2: ConfessionsChapter 3: ImpulsesChapter 4: Impotence Chapter 5: Fragments
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I just got done reading and I'm really blown away! You are excellent at description! I need to learn from you on how to be more descriptive. Somehow, I got the feeling of Spring. For me, when it's Spring time, I see a lot of rain. I also got the image of a raindrop on a big leaf.
The beginning description really sucked me in. BIG TIME!
Koyama was in the other line It should be "on", not "in". Sorry, just wanted to point that out.
Can sleep happily after reading this (even though she isn't sleepy yet).
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OMG REALLY? CAUSE IT SERIOUSLY TOOK ME LIKE A MONTH TO FINISH THIS! MASSUTEGO NEEDS TIME AND LOVE!
It was good I never said which season it was... I didn't write it, right? *ish unsure*
Well, I think the descriptions turned out well because I myself love rain so muchie! You should try too sometime, try writing about something you really really love, like that one time when you told me about bagels with cream cheese (it was bagels with cream cheese? *fails*), I don't know but I felt you liked them a lot!!! Or write about something you saw before and really like, and then add some Koyato porn and that's it!
That's how it works for me! :3 It should be a secret, but for you senpai anything!!!
Thank you very much for your critics! *bows*
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I love fashion, so sue me!
(I thought fangirl journals usually pwn. Am I an exception? ^_~! Hehe!)
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