Fic: Criminology 101 (5/?)

[moeexyz]

Fandom: Community
Title: Criminology 101
Character/Pairing(s): Jeff/Annie
Rating: PG
Summary: Mafia AU. Annie gets her introduction into Greendale's crime world, in the hopes that she can finally bag Troy Barnes.  Meanwhile, Jeff tries to keep things running smoothly while Pierce is busy, and he has no time for silly schoolgirls and their tight

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[teruel_a_witch]

Aaah, evil evil cliffhanger *stomps foot* aahh, how am I supposed to wait noow?

But seriously,though, the plot thickens, awesome chapter, and anyone should know better than to screw with Annie,hehe.

Hee, Jeff just asked her to move in with himthem *claps* I love it when Jeff is impressed/horrified/in awe of Annie.

Jeff assured her, rubbing light circles on her back with his thumb.
agsgdsjdshd the thumb stroking ♥ that was the cutest thing of Troy/Britta's hugs too))

[teruel_a_witch]

Lol, both Jeff and Annie killed a recurring character each in this chapter and I'm not even a little bit sorry for them, I wonder if that makes me a terrible person, then again, I never liked both deceased, so *gg*

[moeexyz]

Muahahahahah! I'm not sorry ;)

Omg, that rubbing circles line. I have a funny anecdote about that. I wrote this chapter like a while ago, cos I always like to be at least one chapter ahead of the story while writing it, so if I make any changes as I go I can go back ... anyway I was proof-reading this to make sure there was no mistakes and it said he was rubbing circles in her mouth with his tongue and I was like lol wut? and I realized I have a subconscious gutter brain that writes crazy things when I'm not looking. I'm still laughing about it as I write this. XDDDD

I never liked both deceased, so
Not even Magnitude? Pop, pop! D:

[teruel_a_witch]

Neither am I. I seam to be really into evil violent and conniving couples right now xD

it said he was rubbing circles in her mouth with his tongue
Mwahaha, that is one hell of a Freudian slip. See, Jeff/Annie are breaking our subconscious with their sexual frustration, WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO US, WRITERS?

I think he was fun the first time around but otherwise he's really just redundant, and he kind of annoys me, he's a person whose personality is limited to a recurring catch phrase, it's kind of gotten old for me.

[amy9231]

you need to start writing novels..i'll buy em all

[moeexyz]

Oh wow. Thank you so much, that's like the nicest comment I've ever gotten.

[amy9231]

aww now that you said that, i'll keep reading your stuff ^_^ can't wait for the next chapter

[moeexyz]

Thank you so much :)

[veryspecial0ne]

I just read this on my phone while standing in a Black Friday line and it was so hard to keep from making a squee-face and freaking people out. It's like crack. I love it.

[moeexyz]

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

[ktcosmopolitan]

Oh, staaaaawwwwwp, this story is getting so damn good, I can't take it.

I'm sorry if I have not reviewed before-I honestly can't remember whether I have or not but I do know that I have previously had to read earlier chapters of this story on my phone, and my phone doesn't care for me typing into text boxes on the internet. Now that my computer is finally fixed, ugh, I get to review this beautiful story and sob over the fact that this chapter ended on such an intense cliffhanger.

Is it terrible that I was sort of excited when Vaughn attacked Annie, only because I knew Jeff would come after him? God, this is what you're doing to me, an amicable person, a peace-monger, a pacifist-you're getting me all excited over violent scenes and murder involving my favorite television show characters! That is so terrible but at the same time I love it. I just L-O-V-E love this story

[moeexyz]

Thank you!

Don't worry about not reviewing. I'm terrible at reviews. I always tell myself I will and then I get to it and I'm like "well everybody else already has, and I'm just gonna be repeating what they said" which I know is awful because I need reviews to live. So I completely understand.

It seems I'm driving a lot of perfectly sane people to love crime and murder, which is weird but also flattering.

I'm glad you're enjoying the characters. They're usually what I worry about most because it's a different universe entirely and I'm always thinking "no, Annie wouldn't do that," but then it works out somehow, so it's nice knowing people like think it works.

They will be a crime family. In italics. And they'll be awesome and kill everybody and rule all of Greendale with their crime.
Dear lord this story's going to drive us all crazy XD

Thank you for your very long comment. I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you're enjoying my story so much.

[biia_black]

I'm so glad you updated, I have surgery tomorrow and reading this made me a lot calmer. So, thank you :)
btw, awesome as always.

[moeexyz]

Thank you. I'm glad I could help make you feel better :)