Fic: Criminology 101 (5/?)

Nov 25, 2011 18:24

Fandom: Community
Title: Criminology 101
Character/Pairing(s): Jeff/Annie
Rating: PG
Summary: Mafia AU. Annie gets her introduction into Greendale's crime world, in the hopes that she can finally bag Troy Barnes.  Meanwhile, Jeff tries to keep things running smoothly while Pierce is busy, and he has no time for silly schoolgirls and their tight ( Read more... )

jeff winger, annie edison, community, jeff/annie, fanfic

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teruel_a_witch November 25 2011, 19:19:12 UTC
Aaah, evil evil cliffhanger *stomps foot* aahh, how am I supposed to wait noow?

But seriously,though, the plot thickens, awesome chapter, and anyone should know better than to screw with Annie,hehe.

Hee, Jeff just asked her to move in with himthem *claps* I love it when Jeff is impressed/horrified/in awe of Annie.

Jeff assured her, rubbing light circles on her back with his thumb.
agsgdsjdshd the thumb stroking ♥ that was the cutest thing of Troy/Britta's hugs too))

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teruel_a_witch November 25 2011, 19:23:18 UTC
Lol, both Jeff and Annie killed a recurring character each in this chapter and I'm not even a little bit sorry for them, I wonder if that makes me a terrible person, then again, I never liked both deceased, so *gg*

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moeexyz November 25 2011, 19:41:02 UTC
Muahahahahah! I'm not sorry ;)

Omg, that rubbing circles line. I have a funny anecdote about that. I wrote this chapter like a while ago, cos I always like to be at least one chapter ahead of the story while writing it, so if I make any changes as I go I can go back ... anyway I was proof-reading this to make sure there was no mistakes and it said he was rubbing circles in her mouth with his tongue and I was like lol wut? and I realized I have a subconscious gutter brain that writes crazy things when I'm not looking. I'm still laughing about it as I write this. XDDDD

I never liked both deceased, so
Not even Magnitude? Pop, pop! D:

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teruel_a_witch November 25 2011, 20:18:44 UTC
Neither am I. I seam to be really into evil violent and conniving couples right now xD

it said he was rubbing circles in her mouth with his tongue
Mwahaha, that is one hell of a Freudian slip. See, Jeff/Annie are breaking our subconscious with their sexual frustration, WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO US, WRITERS?

I think he was fun the first time around but otherwise he's really just redundant, and he kind of annoys me, he's a person whose personality is limited to a recurring catch phrase, it's kind of gotten old for me.

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moeexyz November 25 2011, 23:16:22 UTC
Oh god, these two. They're making me write dirty things when I don't mean to. THAT AIN'T HEALTHY!

I suppose so. To be honest I quite liked Vaughn though. I hope they bring him back someday. There's just so many possibilities for a storyline with that. Plus, Gettin' Rid of Britta.

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teruel_a_witch November 26 2011, 22:49:29 UTC
RIGHT? STOP DRIVING US CRAZY, YOU TWO. (except don't. ever. I want to feel this way about a ship always, it's exhilarating)

Heh, I usually look at the world through Jeff-coloured glasses so I don't like anyone he doesn't like most of the time. I only liked it when Vaughn was a punching bag and butt of the jokes but it annoyed me that both Britta and Annie dated him 'cause they are too good for him and how did he not die of the lack of service,huh? *eyerolls* I wouldn't mind it he came back but I'd be pretty annoyed if Annie likes him again 'cause she's just so much smarter and better than that, I dunno how she put up with Vaughn's dumb-ness, tbh XD

LOL, also, at the rate you are killing off recurring characters soon there will be no one left to kill at Greendale and you'll have to invent new ones XDD

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moeexyz November 28 2011, 22:06:56 UTC
except don't. ever. I want to feel this way about a ship always, it's exhilarating
yeah, I've forgotten what it's like not to go crazy about this ship. I can't imagine what would happen.

Lol I actually liked Annie and Vaughn's relationship. I know he was a douche and an idiot and she probably could do way better, but there was always something about him that I found really endearing. He never seemed like a bad guy to me, just a huge moron. And I think that was a phase Annie needed to go through anyway in a dating sense.

HAHAH. I plan on killing many more. By the end of this the population of Greendale will pretty much consist of the study group.

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teruel_a_witch November 28 2011, 22:49:51 UTC
I remember when my obsession with Doctor/Rose was slowly fading and I yet couldn't find steady home in any other shipperdom and that was kind of bleak, so I'm really glad Conspiracies happened and dragged me in deep into Community and that J/A quickly turned from one of my favourite ships into THE OTP OF ALL OTPS ( ... )

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