Dangerously Jealous [one-shot]

Nov 01, 2011 02:32

Title: Dangerously Jealous [one-shot]
Pairing(s): Sungmin-centric, ninja!KyuMin
Genre: Angst, Humor
Warning(s): swearing, genderswitch, epic failure
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 999 (creepy lol)
Summary: Ever since Sungmin's mother died, she has always been living with just her father. However, one day, her father tells her that he's getting remarried, and ( Read more... )

super junior: kyuhyun, genre: humor, genre: angst, rating: pg-13, super junior: sungmin, pairing: kyumin

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mlss_he November 4 2011, 02:24:58 UTC
No noo, it's okay, you're not being bitchy or anything. :)

I can understand how you don't see any KyuMin interaction seeing as there's no written conversation or anything between them here. I was kind of unsure myself cuz I wasn't sure what to put for pairing, but I ultimately decided to put "KyuMin" because they're the only people in this fic that are actually named; all other characters are actually nameless lol. Also, there is interaction, but it's really subtle and I honestly don't blame you for not catching it (I barely caught it myself, which seems ridiculous because I wrote it xD). Or maybe you did? O.O It's not good to make assumptions since I don't know your side of the story. xD Anyways, there's interaction when Sungmin's father's business partner visits and his (the business partner) son also comes along. Here, Sungmin tries to talk to him and stuff, but he rebuffs her for her stepsister. I had mentioned that this story had previous drafts and stuff and the previous drafts had conversation between KyuMin, but they're lost at school. :( So if I were to make this fic more detailed and stuff again (which I am too lazy to do lol xD), there would be real interaction between KyuMin.

OMG, I wrote a TL;DR LOL

Well, I wrote a lot of stuff and I got confused along the way (which happens often xD), so I'm not exactly sure if I answered your question properly or not. :( Please tell me if I didn't, I'd be happy to explain! ^w^

Anyways, I'm really glad you thought my fic was good! Thanks! :'D

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