Ok, so here.
Katy,
I could list the number of dangerous substances a cigarette is laced with, tell you what can happen to you physically from cigarettes and how many people suffer from it every year but I don't think it would do any good. Basically i'm worried about you. I know you are probably thinking that i don't know anything and that you can stop at any time; but the dangers of cigarettes are real. I don't want to be a middle-aged woman going to your funeral because you developed cancer, or maybe your lungs just gave out from the tar build up.I love you so much and I don't know what i'd do without you, much less if i knew that I had a chance to keep you from slowly killing yourself. I figure that nothing that i say will change your mind but it was worth one last try. You scare me.
This sounded so much better in my mind.
I could list the number of dangerous substances a cigarette is laced with, tell you what can happen to you physically from cigarettes and how many people suffer from it every year but I don't think it would do any good. Basically i'm worried about you. I know you are probably thinking that i don't know anything and that you can stop at any time; but the dangers of cigarettes are real. I don't want to be a middle-aged woman going to your funeral because you developed cancer, or maybe your lungs just gave out from the tar build up.I love you so much and I don't know what i'd do without you, much less if i knew that I had a chance to keep you from slowly killing yourself. I figure that nothing that i say will change your mind but it was worth one last try. You scare me.
This sounded so much better in my mind.