DEFIANT EYES, ANGRY MOUTH: 15. You make me

[mjaku]

Title: defiant eyes, Angry mouth
Rating: R
Pairing: HanMin (Hankyung/Sungmin)
Warnings: Violence, Disturbing things in general, Angst
Word count: 8065
Summary: Sungmin loved the forest more than anything else. However, after he has a dangerous encounter in the forest he loves so much, and after he's forced to have this same encounter in his school

Comments

[naomibe]

It's so good to read you again <3

Heechul seems to be a first class sadistic... and ready to do everything to reach his goal. I wonder what Hankyung saw in him to make him his guardian. Maybe at that time Heechul was more « human » than now. Or maybe he played a role in front of Hankyung. Or maybe Hankyung was blind with love. Or... @@
Ah, Sungmin is so clearly different from the other guardians ! One of them... So he isn't alone. I wonder if he'll meet another guardian/human like him. Maybe in the convention ?

I'm glad that Sungmin feel bad for Hankyung ^^. It's not particularly nice for him, I know, but I'm happy that he realized his mistakes. He slowly began to move on and to admit that his wolf is an important person for him, even if it's difficult to call it « love ». But he likes him enough to improve himself.

”No problem. I have an endless storage of those so contact me when you’re in the need of a real mind fuck.”
“I’ll skin you alive if you forget.”
Kyuhyun, I love you.

“All packs have been adviced to be on their best behavior. If not, those wolves raising havoc in the convention will be punished accordingly.”
Well... When humans gather they show off in front of everyone to prove they are the best and act stupid. And wolves are territorials, they are lead by their instinct. Of course they will act like nice little dogs <<

“It’s either attend or get euthanized.”
Are they crazy oO. Wow. It's not particularly « human », for someone who wants so badly that wolves act like human beings, to euthanize someone else...

I really like Kyuhyun. He seems not really nice but he's efficient, the cold scientist type with snarky comments. I wonder what he found about Sungmin and the mark ><.

“Oh you mean you’re in screaming terms at the moment?”
“I suggest that when the next time comes, you should close the window.”
Mi is so gentle and cute and funny, I want to hug him <3

I like Eunhyuk behavior during the heat. He's very possessive and territorial with Donghae. I think Sungmin didn't realize the danger to approach them at the moment. Maybe Eunhyuk isn't this « tempered » with a stranger and Sungmin is lucky to be Donghae's friend.

"Hankyung was repeating one tricky looking kick again and again, a concentrated expression on his face. He didn’t have his shirt on, and sweat was glistening on his toned upper body."
<3.

Wow. The fight between Hankyung and Sungmin in the dance studio is a really great idea. I understand that Sungmin is too surprise to react (and that Hankyung is pretty angry) but a big and hard fight would be salutary for both of them to relieve tensions.

“Maybe I just wanted to remind myself just HOW this whole shit started? I liked your attitude in the beginning because you had spark in you. Then the spark turned to and grade 1 ASSHOLE.”
I have to agree with him. I suppose that Hankyung, being a wolf, is maybe stronger and a better fighter than Sungmin. But at the beginning of the story, I think Sungmin could have been able to retaliate.

“Kiss me.”
I love how it seems more important than have sex.

“Why do you need to compare the genetic material from my blood and sperm? Won’t they be the same?”
I'm asking myself the same question. Kyuhyun, why are you so cryptic <<. Hm... It's difficult to have a conclusion but... I suppose that the sperm will give Sungmin's real genetic material. Like : sperm DNA = Sungmin DNA, like a blank sample. And so if the blood is different... maybe the genetic material of the blood came from somewhere / someone else ? Can Kyuhyun find Hankyung's DNA in Sungmin's body ? Or something else ? We'll see~

And I found the last scene very beautiful. Like Sungmin said, the night atmosphere is pretty soothing. I'm glad that Sungmin succeeded to open himself and talked to Hankyung. I hope they will sleep peacefully and became more relaxed with each other.

Even if you say you didn't like this chapter, I appreciated it a lot :)
Good luck for the next part !
And thank you <3