PW, "The Slow Ascent after the Sharpest Drop: IX," Apollo/Klavier, NC-17

[mistr3ssquickly]

You probably wouldn't guess that getting a craft book would make fanfiction happen faster, but the way my brain is wired up, that's precisely what happened. I got a book on how to mod t-shirts (Generation T), got all excited, and bam! Wrote chapter nine of TSAATSD.

Only it wasn't chapter nine, it was chapter ten, but I didn't know that until I got

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[trinastar]

That was unique, Apollo chastising Klavier for not showing Mr. Wright out... only to find out that there was towel issues. And the comforting scene... nummy with a side of aww. I like the way you ended this part, even if my brain is distracted by the telly but I'm sure it will be functional again later.

[mistr3ssquickly]

Hee~ 's why I don't have a TV, thing's distracting!

What I was going for with the not-showing-Phoenix-out was Klavier's sulkiness that Phoenix "told you so" about Apollo going to see Kristoph. Klavier's pouting and Apollo knows it. XD

Thanks for reading, dear! ♥

~m

[trinastar]

Two part comment reply in one comment thing. *blinks* and if you can follow the logic in that one you are by far more quick witted then I am

[mistr3ssquickly]

Haha, no point in having cable when there are DVDs, right? Stuff's expensive, and it's money down the drain if "nothing's on."

Plus, there's JCon. You should come back and see us, we miss you. ;_;

I'm glad to know that you're enjoying this without canon background. As a writer, I'm enjoying it too, which is the point of fanfiction, yes? Good times all around.

*smooch* Fingers crossed on The Perfect Job, for which I am right now applying! :D

~m

[crystal_lilly]

You are killing me here.

No seriously. I'm going to go into withdrawal as soon as I hit the end of Chapter 11.

*hugs tight* Awesome chapter!! Oooooh, the plot thickens. I love the beginning, Klavier's little diva-fit that he hides under the excuse of not being dressed (and of course, Apollo had to confirm the fact that he was indeed only in a towel at the time *grin*). The sex is great, I really felt like they were releasing tension and trying to get back on an even keel. (Not to mention it was so hot, yes. ^__^)

And then, the little bit of history about Apollo falling asleep was so fabulous, a warm fluffy moment that could have closed out the chapter... only BAM!! Klavier shows that he is still double dealing and not keeping Apollo in the loop at all. *grumble* I understand the need to protect the people you love, but... Klavier's clumsy attempts at deception and secrecy are going to drive Apollo away from him.

And I was right (but I almost hated being right) because Apollo felt so hurt and betrayed especially from