PW, "Inauspicious Beginnings," Maya/Franziska, Phoenix/Miles, PG

[mistr3ssquickly]

The prompt for this one (kink meme fic, but you knew that already) was "two competent adults going on an awkward date." And somehow, in my determination to write Edgeworth and Gumshoe, I ended up with ... Franziska and Maya.

Don't ask, I don't know.

BUT! It's my first posted yuri, so that's exciting. Also, I would do Franziska in a heartbeat, but

Comments

[pockygirl]

harass me in the morning for a more coherent reply that 'Squueemayayfran &thebitwiththeswing<3', 'kay?

[mistr3ssquickly]

Only if you promise me your brain won't be trying to pound its way out of your skull when I prod you for feedback. *rubs your neck*

~m

[sailormac]

That. Was. ADORABLE. It was the ultimate case of everything that could go wrong, going wrong -- especially the swing incident! At least it all worked out in the end, bloody nose aside!

[mistr3ssquickly]

*laughs* I'm glad you liked, hon! Poor girls, you know? Can't have a peaceful date with the "little brother" wandering around! XD

Thanks for reading! (Have I got you intrigued by this fandom yet, damnit?) XP

~m

[pollinia]

Awwww! So cute and funny and HAVE I EVER TOLD YOU HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR DIALOGUE? Because I do. Each character has such a distinct voice, and I know who's talking without seeing the tags (even when I'm not very familiar with the characters). You are such a strong writer.

Also, Miles/Phoenix tidbit at the end. I'm beginning to fangirl them. I fear an obsession. >.>'

[mistr3ssquickly]

♥♥♥ I'm so glad you like the dialogue in this, hon! I can hear them in my head when I write, so it's good to know it comes out in the story itself. :D

Hahaha, join me in the obsession over this canon's characters! It's such a friendly place to be ... ^_~

~m

[shychloe]

I love google for helping me find this fic. *I did a google search on Franziska/Maya*

This was a lovely fic, loved the flow and the dialogue. Sounded really natural and was a fun read as well. =>

[mistr3ssquickly]

Aww, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you, hon!

If you want more Fran/Maya (not written by me, but some of my favorites), I have them linked here and here. They were cute/funny/sweet, if memory serves. Definitely worth a read.

Thank you so much for letting me know that you read and liked mine!! <3

~m

[shychloe]

You're welcome and thanks for the links. 'll be reading them now. ^-^