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missyjack

Like broken heroes

Apr 15, 2007 23:01

Title: Like broken heroes

Author: missyjack
Pairing: John/Dean
Words: 1,125

Rating: NC-17 although no explicit sex

Warning: Daddycest

Summary: First and last kisses.

The first time Dean kissed his father, not as a son but as a man, he was seventeen.

John had returned from a hunt with the haunted look Dean knew too well. Sam was asleep in the other room ( Read more... )

john/dean, wincest

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dendritejungle April 15 2007, 14:20:42 UTC

...wow.

*gruffly* Yeah, it's some dust in my eye, that's all...

missyjack April 16 2007, 00:19:02 UTC

Thanks- glad it worked for you.

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missyjack April 16 2007, 00:19:43 UTC

*pats you*

I must be a hard bastard becuase I didn't think it was that sad!

angstpuppy April 15 2007, 18:25:05 UTC

um.
Yeah, you just go ahead a keep tearin' my heart out and stompin' on it.
I don't mind. Really.
:sniff:

missyjack April 16 2007, 00:20:18 UTC

sorry bout your heart...again. Glad it worked for you tho.

astrothsknot April 15 2007, 20:52:28 UTC

That's mean, making me bleed for them, when I'm already bleeding

missyjack April 16 2007, 00:20:48 UTC

*hands you hot water bottle*

thanks!

nixwilliams April 15 2007, 21:59:25 UTC

awesome, awesome, awesome. you know what? i don't think i've ever read daddycest without fucking before. like maybe it's not actually teh cest at all, but this other layer in their relationship. and it works really, really well! i love the first/last thing, too, and the mirror-flip progression. yay!

missyjack April 16 2007, 00:24:45 UTC

Oh you are too kind! Glad it worked for you as it was one of those pieces where i was actually exploring what i felt about these two as I wrote. And I planned on writing teh sexing, but leaving it at a kiss seemed to keep more of the complexity in. Thanks again.

nixwilliams April 16 2007, 00:33:47 UTC

leaving it at a kiss seemed to keep more of the complexity in

absolutely. i love that it's kind of ambiguous this way. i really enjoy the distinction in this line: "Dean kissed his father, not as a son but as a man", and the way this flavours the kiss as a kind of hyper-masculine action.

missyjack April 16 2007, 00:41:08 UTC

flavours the kiss as a kind of hyper-masculine action mmm yummy hyper masculine flavour...

this pairing works for me because they are manly men and their response to emotion is always physical - eg if you're afraid shoot it, if you're angry punch it, if you love it, fuck it - so it makes sense that their need for comfort, approval whatever would be expressed this way.

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