Like broken heroes

Apr 15, 2007 23:01


Title: Like broken heroes

Author: missyjack
Pairing: John/Dean
Words: 1,125

Rating: NC-17 although no explicit sex

Warning: Daddycest

Summary: First and last kisses.

The first time Dean kissed his father, not as a son but as a man, he was seventeen.

John had returned from a hunt with the haunted look Dean knew too well. Sam was asleep in the other room ( Read more... )

john/dean, wincest

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nixwilliams April 15 2007, 21:59:25 UTC
awesome, awesome, awesome. you know what? i don't think i've ever read daddycest without fucking before. like maybe it's not actually teh cest at all, but this other layer in their relationship. and it works really, really well! i love the first/last thing, too, and the mirror-flip progression. yay!

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missyjack April 16 2007, 00:24:45 UTC
Oh you are too kind! Glad it worked for you as it was one of those pieces where i was actually exploring what i felt about these two as I wrote. And I planned on writing teh sexing, but leaving it at a kiss seemed to keep more of the complexity in. Thanks again.

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nixwilliams April 16 2007, 00:33:47 UTC
leaving it at a kiss seemed to keep more of the complexity in

absolutely. i love that it's kind of ambiguous this way. i really enjoy the distinction in this line: "Dean kissed his father, not as a son but as a man", and the way this flavours the kiss as a kind of hyper-masculine action.

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missyjack April 16 2007, 00:41:08 UTC
flavours the kiss as a kind of hyper-masculine action mmm yummy hyper masculine flavour...

this pairing works for me because they are manly men and their response to emotion is always physical - eg if you're afraid shoot it, if you're angry punch it, if you love it, fuck it - so it makes sense that their need for comfort, approval whatever would be expressed this way.

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nixwilliams April 16 2007, 01:02:26 UTC
aaarrrghhh grarrr ugggh manly men grunt grunt. i think the t is changing me! XD

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