'Hee' yourself, I was JUST about to post the edit on my squee comment when you replied. Blocking me! Grrr. LOL. :D
Anyway here it is:
*comes back, all misty-eyed* Awww! That was lovely!! It's so good that they got time to talk and even the playing-field a bit. And, kissing in secluded romantic locations FTW! :D
Don't be apologizing - there's a lot of little detail you've got to cover here, no wonder it was tricky! But really, it doesn't show. :)
Chapter 12 is in brainstorming phase. My beta will think I'm a pain in the *bleep* in the coming days. I really want to get the plot going and weave things together. And I don't want to take a month and a half like this one did. God, I think it was my most intensive re-write so far. And that says a lot cause I've had some pretty insane and daunting ones. :P
And as far as she was concerned, there was nothing more enticing than a slow burn.
Yes! And you've done a lovely job of setting that up here. I really enjoyed their conversation and the fact that they got to have it in private. And yeah, kissing! :) Sweet.
Oh my! You know those butterflies in Laura's stomach? I got em too! This is too wonderful for words. Even got me a little choked up. And to think, if you'd posted one minute later, I'd had missed it. Now, it's after 3am and I might get three hours of sleep, but that is so OK!!!! Beautiful as always missbevcrusher!!!! Goodnight/morning. :)
Wow! I sounded just a little tired (or idiotic) in that comment. lol I just want to let you know what this series does to me. You remember watching BSG, and after each episode, you'd think about it all week, and certain thoughts would just bring smiles to your face and warm fuzzies inside? No? Well, I just don't believe you. ;) Anyway, that is Through Time & Season for me! It's such a sweet, honest story. When I first watched the movie, I was not overly impressed. I thought the acting was mediocre (except for Mary), the writing was too vague, and it just kinda had a so-so quality about it. But now, I have to say, I'd definitely list it as one of my top ten favorite movies of all time. All thanks to this jewel you have created! It's like going back and watching your favorite BSG eps after reading an awesome fanfic... you watch from a different, more satisfying perspective. OK. That's my gush for the day (unless sczepa uploads a new vid, of course)... I love your perspective, your heart, your you! :)
Gosh, I'm really touched. Your comment totally made me smile. I'm glad this piece is making the movie better for you. And I agree, it lacked in a lot of ways. (Too much 21st century blah blah and not enough Mary imo) Plus the ending made me throw my hands up and go "Ahhh come on!!!!!"
I totally pouted when it was over, then went online trying to find fanfic that finished the story. I only found ficlets on mary mcawesome (which were awesome btw) and decided what the hell, I'll write one.
I'm glad some of you are enjoying the story I'm building. I would have written it for me regardless but knowing that it makes other people smile makes it all the more fulfilling.
Awwwwwwwwww... wow... oy... wow... hmmmph... wow.... awwwwwww..... Again you showed me how perfect writing can be if someone treats word with care, respect and love. You painted such a beautiful picture here, it leaves me quite speechless! You are amazing! Thanks so much for sharing!
P.S. The moment they confessed their love for each other I was sitting on the edge of my seat sighing loudly.
This chapter was really worth all the effort. It feels so (excuse me for using this word) frakking right. Thanks to work I hardly got around to read anything but I knew I had to read this, and believe me it was TEH ray of sunshine for me today. :D
Thank you so much. You can't imagine how much your comment made me smile. This chapter was extremely difficult to write because when I started I felt like my narrative was all screwy. And I went through a phase where I lost my writing voice.
So thank you. I'm glad you like the style in which I wrote. It took a while but I finally found the words I wanted.
Ooooh, icons. I can't wait. If you need some, I posted several at fate_and_time They're not wow but they're better than nothing. They're posted in comments on a post where someone asked for caps.
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I couldn't sleep so at 5:15 I got up and when I checked my emails I saw that the beta was done. Figured why not post?
Hope it was worth the wait. It was really hard to write. I'll apologize if it wasn't. Hopefully next chapter won't be as daunting. ;-)
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Anyway here it is:
*comes back, all misty-eyed* Awww! That was lovely!! It's so good that they got time to talk and even the playing-field a bit. And, kissing in secluded romantic locations FTW! :D
Don't be apologizing - there's a lot of little detail you've got to cover here, no wonder it was tricky! But really, it doesn't show. :)
Also, there was KISSING. And it was... :D
Now. Where is Chapter 12? :)
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Chapter 12 is in brainstorming phase. My beta will think I'm a pain in the *bleep* in the coming days. I really want to get the plot going and weave things together. And I don't want to take a month and a half like this one did. God, I think it was my most intensive re-write so far. And that says a lot cause I've had some pretty insane and daunting ones. :P
I'm beginning to think I'm hopeless. ;-)
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Yes! And you've done a lovely job of setting that up here. I really enjoyed their conversation and the fact that they got to have it in private. And yeah, kissing! :) Sweet.
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So very glad you enjoyed. Good night. Sleep well. *hugs*
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Anyway, that is Through Time & Season for me! It's such a sweet, honest story. When I first watched the movie, I was not overly impressed. I thought the acting was mediocre (except for Mary), the writing was too vague, and it just kinda had a so-so quality about it. But now, I have to say, I'd definitely list it as one of my top ten favorite movies of all time. All thanks to this jewel you have created!
It's like going back and watching your favorite BSG eps after reading an awesome fanfic... you watch from a different, more satisfying perspective.
OK. That's my gush for the day (unless sczepa uploads a new vid, of course)... I love your perspective, your heart, your you! :)
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I totally pouted when it was over, then went online trying to find fanfic that finished the story. I only found ficlets on mary mcawesome (which were awesome btw) and decided what the hell, I'll write one.
I'm glad some of you are enjoying the story I'm building. I would have written it for me regardless but knowing that it makes other people smile makes it all the more fulfilling.
Again, thank you. *hugs*
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Again you showed me how perfect writing can be if someone treats word with care, respect and love.
You painted such a beautiful picture here, it leaves me quite speechless!
You are amazing! Thanks so much for sharing!
P.S. The moment they confessed their love for each other I was sitting on the edge of my seat sighing loudly.
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I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was hard to write but over the various attempts, I found the narrative I wanted. It felt right to me.
Thanks again, for reading and for being so wonderful with your comments. :-)
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Thanks to work I hardly got around to read anything but I knew I had to read this, and believe me it was TEH ray of sunshine for me today. :D
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So thank you. I'm glad you like the style in which I wrote. It took a while but I finally found the words I wanted.
*hugs*
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