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zaleti September 25 2009, 09:09:31 UTC
SQUEE! *goes to read*

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missbevcrusher September 25 2009, 09:28:12 UTC
Hee! :D

I couldn't sleep so at 5:15 I got up and when I checked my emails I saw that the beta was done. Figured why not post?

Hope it was worth the wait. It was really hard to write. I'll apologize if it wasn't. Hopefully next chapter won't be as daunting. ;-)

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zaleti September 25 2009, 09:35:28 UTC
'Hee' yourself, I was JUST about to post the edit on my squee comment when you replied. Blocking me! Grrr. LOL. :D

Anyway here it is:

*comes back, all misty-eyed* Awww! That was lovely!! It's so good that they got time to talk and even the playing-field a bit. And, kissing in secluded romantic locations FTW! :D

Don't be apologizing - there's a lot of little detail you've got to cover here, no wonder it was tricky! But really, it doesn't show. :)

Also, there was KISSING. And it was... :D

Now. Where is Chapter 12? :)

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missbevcrusher September 25 2009, 09:38:57 UTC
Yay! Glad you liked it. :D

Chapter 12 is in brainstorming phase. My beta will think I'm a pain in the *bleep* in the coming days. I really want to get the plot going and weave things together. And I don't want to take a month and a half like this one did. God, I think it was my most intensive re-write so far. And that says a lot cause I've had some pretty insane and daunting ones. :P

I'm beginning to think I'm hopeless. ;-)

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zaleti September 25 2009, 09:45:28 UTC
Hey, we've all been there. I've overhauled scenes and plots more times than I'd like. But I usually figure, if your brain's nagging you to do it, there's a reason. :D

And you're not hopeless, you're just an inveterate editor, clearly. This is a good thing. And it puts you in illustrious company, LOL. ;P

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missbevcrusher September 25 2009, 09:47:20 UTC
And now I am smiling. Thank you. :-)

Did I add you on IM btw? I sometimes fail computer-wise and I'm not sure if the invite got through. *facepalm*

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zaleti September 25 2009, 09:50:13 UTC
YAY! :D
(And, I'm not sure - I fail MSN-wise just at the moment. Haven't been on in a while... *goes to see*)

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missbevcrusher September 25 2009, 09:51:39 UTC
And YAY again! I'm not alone in my MSN failitudes. (I know that's not a word lol)

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zaleti September 25 2009, 09:52:19 UTC
Heh! Is now, LOL. :D

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