Comments | missbayliss: Fic: Picking up the Pieces (SPN) Chapter One

missbayliss

Fic: Picking up the Pieces (SPN) Chapter One

Jul 31, 2016 20:59

Genre: Sick!fic, hurt/comfort, Epic, Slightly AU
Category: Gen
Rating: T
Characters: Dean, Sam, Bobby, Cas, a few OCs
Warning: Very mild language. Descriptions of Hell. Can be considered slightly AU as Dean is not healed from his old wounds when Castiel raised him from perdition. Angst. Descriptions of panic attacks and mental health content.
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ptsd, alcohol abuse, angst, hurt/comfort, supernatural, chronic pain, hurt!dean, dean winchester, sam winchester, spn, fanfiction, supernatural fan fiction, nightmares

Comments 7

Oh wow! indigo_inkpot July 31 2016, 23:37:28 UTC

I am currently half an hour into my birthday, and it felt like a gift from fate to see a new story from you!
I fell in love with the prequel, Taking Some Time - it's actually the reason I made a livejournal account! - and this chapter has not only made my day (despite it only being 00:30) but it has also already surpassed TST as my favourite story on here!
I love the part where Dean's panicking, and Sam just presses their foreheads together and you can feel the brotherly love there! That exchange was lovely.
I also really like Katie and Riley as characters; you've done a really good job of setting them both up as distinctly different people (far too often all female OCs seem the same, but these two are so well established) and I think it'll be really interesting to see the development of the contrast between these two women and how their energies affect Dean.
Thank you so much for writing this, I wish you the best of luck with the next chapter and the rest of this story! <3 ( ... )

RE: Oh wow! missbayliss August 1 2016, 09:05:31 UTC

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
First of all, I hope you've had an amazing day.
I am beyond flattered. I'm so glad you like my story. As a huge fan of fanfiction I personally love when authors that I like post new stories or update chapters. There's one I'm reading right now that I am just waiting for the next chapter every second. So I share your excitement, and the fact you would say something like that about my writing makes me very happy :)
I'm glad you're liking it. I loved the forehead press.
I didn't initially mean to set the two girls so far apart but it just seemed to turn out that way. Riley has taken on much more dimension than I initially planned for her and I actually really like her. I'm interested to see what happens as well :P
I hope you had a great day and thank you so much for your feedback. Made my day. <3

mdlaw August 1 2016, 00:16:44 UTC

I'm so glad to see this, and what a great way to start. m :)

Yay! zeldaisis August 1 2016, 10:45:20 UTC

I love your writings and I was so excited to see your sequel! I like that we see Dean on the mend kinda sorta, still depending on Sam is a plus. The other maybe love interest is exciting. She seems cute, kinda of in a different world that Dean is in while Riley is in another. This is going to be a fun read. What other stories are you reading, just out of curiosity.

Re: Yay! missbayliss August 3 2016, 12:05:13 UTC

Thanks for commenting! Glad you're enjoying the series :)
I'm currently reading Face Down in the Desert by Noxbait on FanFiction.net, seriously struggling to make it from chapter to chapter. I hang on to every word! https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11900332/1/Face-Down-in-the-Desert
The prequel to this fic is The Christmas Spirit (which I loved more than anything) https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10905035/1/The-Christmas-Spirit
Very, very long fics but super easy to get through (I've read it twice). They read very well.
Thanks again x

Re: Yay! zeldaisis August 4 2016, 15:26:19 UTC

I loved The Christmas Spirit! I cannot wait to read the sequel. Somehow I didn't know that. Thanks!

tearling August 2 2016, 01:53:50 UTC

YAYYYYYYYYYY!