Author: Miss_Sanguine
Title: Soaring
Pairing: Aang x Katara
Rating: K
Disclaimer: Bryke and Nick own Avatar.
Author's Notes: My attempt at the emotion "Love". My friend
likeacliche is helping me get better at expressing emotion in my work. She pointed out that sometimes my work sounds like a textbook instead of a story--at least in terms of emotion other than
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Anyway I seriously love this :'D It could still be better but you captured the innocence and sweetness I was hoping for. Do you seriously hate the song now? XD It's such a good one D:
And keep working on the ending. "the two were off" seems hollow. A bit more description to it perhaps?
THIS ONE HAS SURPASSED MY LOVE FOR "DARK SHADOWS". =D =D =D
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And yes that is a much better ending :3
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