Comments | miss_odell: Fic: Next Time(cm)

miss_odell

Fic: Next Time(cm)

Jul 26, 2009 19:31

Title: Next Time
Rating: PG
Pairing: Reid/Morgan
Spoilers/Warnings: None
Notes: Very short ficlet, written while I was waiting for the dentist to see me. The idea came to me last night while I was watching Memoriam ,and I was amazed with how patient Morgan was with Reid during the whole episode(Ups,that’s not a spoiler is it?). Unbetaed, so all ( Read more... )

reid/morgan, fic, criminal minds

Comments 14

brittdavis21 July 27 2009, 02:26:16 UTC

I really liked this.

miss_odell July 27 2009, 03:23:50 UTC

Thank you! :D

bookgodess15 July 27 2009, 03:09:10 UTC

Very nice! I can't wait to hear more from you!

(One concrit--less commas. Way less commas.)

miss_odell July 27 2009, 03:29:20 UTC

LOL,I was kind of worried about the commas,I thought it was too much while I was reading it,but people always say I speak too fast so I thought I should pause my writing.
Besides English is not my native language,and in Spanish we use more commas.
I'll keep it mind for the next time though,you're very nice.
Thank you!!!

bookgodess15 July 27 2009, 11:56:26 UTC

Honey, you may not be a native English speaker, but you're a hell of a lot better than most of the native English writers, and if commas are the worst of your problems? Be proud. Your English is a lot better than my Spanish.

Betas are very nice to have--maybe you should try asking around for one? I don't know how often you write, of course, but... Something to consider!

miss_odell July 27 2009, 17:18:48 UTC

Oh,of course I considered the idea of a beta.Actually,I have one for the other fandom I'm writing for. But I skipped it this time for two reasons:first, the story was very short so I knew I was going to get mistakes but nothing that people would like to kill me for(hopefully)and second,and this was the principal reason, I wanted to see if I had the balls to post something. Believe me,I'm the most shy girl in the world and I was shaking all over when I clicked the posting button so I needed to dive right in.
So if you or any of the lovely people who replied to this post knows somebody who could beta for me in this fandom,I'd be very grateful.

momma_66 July 27 2009, 03:19:27 UTC

very lovely

miss_odell July 27 2009, 03:30:41 UTC

Thanks! ;)

sexycazzy July 27 2009, 09:48:54 UTC

Very nice. I hope to read some more of yours :-)

miss_odell July 27 2009, 17:20:18 UTC

Thank you hun! =)

suki_blue July 27 2009, 15:57:33 UTC

Lovely!

miss_odell July 27 2009, 17:21:27 UTC

Thanks!!