Ok, Let's Give This A Shot!
Ok, now, I'm probably regret this in the morning, as I'm really tired, so of course, bad judgment, but I think I'm ready to share something I wrote. A song. This is a big deal to me, I don't share this stuff. I love to write, but I've never really known if it's any good. Please comment. Whether good or bad, I just want to know your opinions. But I've learned to scream miraculously, so anything italicized means it's a scream. This is the newest one I wrote just a little while ago. So here it goes. I don't have a title yet though. But, hopefully, enjoy. ^_^
The Chorus is:
Ashes to kill me Ashes to make me who I am
Darkness to claim me Darkness to steal my life from me
Nightmares to haunt me Nightmares to show me what I've done
Ashes to kill me Ashes to kill me
Chorus
Ashes to ashes and dust to dust
Everything left of me has been reduced to lust
I rip off everything I rip it down
It's time to lose what has been found
Chorus
You knew me before, you don't know me now
Different forever, from all the same vows
I've committed more than this, I'm committed to my sins
You would never believe me if I told you what I've been
And I'd lie to you, I'd lie to you
If I could look you in the eyes
I'd lie to you, I'd lie to you
I'd spare you from this truth, If this heart could beat, this heart could beat for you
Chorus
This blood stained smile is my reward
For the life that I have lived, that I have lived
This torn heart is my badge
The sign that I've loved, that I could once love
And I'd lie to you, I'd lie to you
If I could look you in the eyes
I'd lie to you, I'd lie to you
I'd spare you from this truth, If this heart could beat, this heart could beat for you
Chorus
Let my heart run dry Let my blood run cold
Let my body rot away From what you've been told
I'll take this life It takes me from this pain
I just need, I need to fade away
Less talk! To die! I don't need words tonight!
Less talk! To die! I don't need words! (repeat a few times I guess, I haven't worked that one out yet : P )
Chorus
Ashes to kill me Ashes to make me who I am (same here, i guess)
Ashes to kill me Ashes to kill me....