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Prompt 29 - Miss

Apr 07, 2010 09:51

Title: Persistence
Author: yumi_michiyo
Rating: K+
Genre: General/Angst
Universe: Anime canon
Word Count: 300
Summary: Moonlit conversation, denial and persistence.
A/N: Set in episode 78, somewhere between slaying the bear demon and the Inu-tachi's departure from the castle.

( Persistence )

#29 - miss, author: yumi_michiyo, length - drabble

Comments 4

quirkysmuse April 7 2010, 16:09:17 UTC

Ooh, great tension in this. Loved it! Nice work.

yumi_michiyo April 8 2010, 06:57:52 UTC

Thanks :)

landofthekwt April 9 2010, 20:42:43 UTC

I like the openess of the lord with his feelings. Miroku's refusal to fight for her in this episode made her mad and caused her to attack the bear one on
one. It was only when Sango was in danger that Miroku stepped in to show everyone how much he cared for Sango.

yumi_michiyo April 10 2010, 06:34:06 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it.