Ohayo, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! Thank you to everyone who commented on my "Falling Feathers" ficlet, I'm so glad you enjoyed it
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*shining eyes* Wow, an update so soon.... *happy dance* Migraine, shmigraine....STORYTIME, BB. *giggles*
I totally loved this and can see where Hankyung is coming from; he knows next to nothing about Donghae yet Donghae knows just about everything about him (despite his wishes to the contrary at the beginning...). I feel so bad for him now...things are gonna get worse, aren't they? *wibbles sadly*
Tackey, why couldn't you have just stayed away? *sadface*
Thank you so much for the support you show my work!
And you're right, Hankyung has realized how little he knows about Donghae previous to his life with Eeteuk. However, Hankyung too still have some skeletons in his closet. (Which could be another sequel if I feel up to it!)
Takki may seem like a villain at the moment but I also promise there's more to him than meets the eye.
i probably shouldn't be reading this right now especially since its like 1235am... should be doing my tutorial or better yet sleep~! but I just can't help squealing over the update when I refreshed my friends page!!!!
ahhhhhh.....it's all angsty and hard to read...poor hannie and hae..they're both dealing with their own issues which had never been resolved before and it's coming back to haunt them unexpectedly (or is it expectedly?). I wonder what's going to happen next...
and though it was angst and sad, I'm happy to read the update! now I can continue with my tutorial!!haha. Thank you!
Thank you so much! My goodness, I seem to be stalling everyone from doing what they're supposed to be! ::laughs::
I like how you stated that both Hae and Hannie are dealing with their own issues. It's very hard some times to open up about things that you've hidden so much in the past.
I understand Donghae's pain, and it isn't his fault for reacting like that, but what he did really hurts. I hope that after a while he'll be able to really open up to Hannie and talk. Hannie's doing everything he could, after all. And he's right. They can't just suddenly go back to Tokyo like that. Wah! Donghae, how could you?T_T
I loved the part where Hannie said 'I lost my life' and the last sentence of that part, the 'losing Shiwon had been the precipice...' because they hurt. You were able to express that really well and now I'm so sad for Hannie. Because of Hae's reaction, I think he still has some left over feelings for Takki (or maybe I'm just reading into it too much XD). Hannie had been able to tell Hae the secrets of his soul even back when they didn't know each other much, but Hae, even though he knows that Hannie loves him, is acting like that. Yeah, maybe I'm reading into it too much >_< I loved every part of this chapter. Hannie and Donghae's 'fight' was heartbreaking. Takki meeting up with
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Thank you for those lovely words! I do look forward to reading you comments, they make my day!
Donghae's having a very difficult time as we can see. But he does know that he was hard on Hankyung, more so than he meant to be. There's a lot that our little Fish is dealing with when someone he was sure was dead just appears out of nowhere. He has so many unanswered questions.
As if Donghae still has feelings for Takki, well, that's to be revealed actually in the following chapter. There's much more to Takki also than meets the eye. But I can say that the HanHae has been through much, but they have a true and deep bond. After all, they've almost died for each other, ne?
Takki's meeting with Eeteuk has been something I've been DYING to write. After all, we know in the cafe in this chapter that Takki called Eeteuk "Jungsu," so that should be a hint!
T_T Hannie *pouts* Oh man...I hope nothing happens to Hae >.<;;;
*_* oh man...Hannie makes me sad and I'm still upset over SJ being overworked so much and this isn't making it better for me *_* *doesn't know what I'm talking about anymore*
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The two really don't know enough about each other, but they're the other's lifeline...What's Hannie gonna do...??
"I think... I think I just lost my life..."
This line hit me hard...It's so powerful, that it hurt just reading it, cuz I could picture him saying it...
What's gonna happen with them?
And with Leeteuk and Takki?!?!?!?!
More please!!!!!!!!::puppy eyes::
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And as we've all realized, the two don't really know as much as they thought about each other. (Hannie too still has some skeletons in his closet.)
As for Eeteuk and Takki, that's a part I've been DYING to get too, after all they are long time friends!
I hope the next chapter is worth the wait.
On a random note, if that's Donghae's sexy back, I want Hannie to be licking it right now... XD
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I can't WAIT to see where you're taking this fic!!! I know I don't review every chap, but I'm riveted, nonetheless!!!
I'm so excited for the next chapter!!!!!::bounces in anticipation::
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I totally loved this and can see where Hankyung is coming from; he knows next to nothing about Donghae yet Donghae knows just about everything about him (despite his wishes to the contrary at the beginning...). I feel so bad for him now...things are gonna get worse, aren't they? *wibbles sadly*
Tackey, why couldn't you have just stayed away? *sadface*
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And you're right, Hankyung has realized how little he knows about Donghae previous to his life with Eeteuk. However, Hankyung too still have some skeletons in his closet. (Which could be another sequel if I feel up to it!)
Takki may seem like a villain at the moment but I also promise there's more to him than meets the eye.
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but I just can't help squealing over the update when I refreshed my friends page!!!!
ahhhhhh.....it's all angsty and hard to read...poor hannie and hae..they're both dealing with their own issues which had never been resolved before and it's coming back to haunt them unexpectedly (or is it expectedly?). I wonder what's going to happen next...
and though it was angst and sad, I'm happy to read the update! now I can continue with my tutorial!!haha.
Thank you!
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I like how you stated that both Hae and Hannie are dealing with their own issues. It's very hard some times to open up about things that you've hidden so much in the past.
I hope the next chapter is worth the wait!
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I understand Donghae's pain, and it isn't his fault for reacting like that, but what he did really hurts. I hope that after a while he'll be able to really open up to Hannie and talk. Hannie's doing everything he could, after all. And he's right. They can't just suddenly go back to Tokyo like that. Wah! Donghae, how could you?T_T
I loved the part where Hannie said 'I lost my life' and the last sentence of that part, the 'losing Shiwon had been the precipice...' because they hurt. You were able to express that really well and now I'm so sad for Hannie. Because of Hae's reaction, I think he still has some left over feelings for Takki (or maybe I'm just reading into it too much XD). Hannie had been able to tell Hae the secrets of his soul even back when they didn't know each other much, but Hae, even though he knows that Hannie loves him, is acting like that. Yeah, maybe I'm reading into it too much >_< I loved every part of this chapter. Hannie and Donghae's 'fight' was heartbreaking. Takki meeting up with ( ... )
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Donghae's having a very difficult time as we can see. But he does know that he was hard on Hankyung, more so than he meant to be. There's a lot that our little Fish is dealing with when someone he was sure was dead just appears out of nowhere. He has so many unanswered questions.
As if Donghae still has feelings for Takki, well, that's to be revealed actually in the following chapter. There's much more to Takki also than meets the eye. But I can say that the HanHae has been through much, but they have a true and deep bond. After all, they've almost died for each other, ne?
Takki's meeting with Eeteuk has been something I've been DYING to write. After all, we know in the cafe in this chapter that Takki called Eeteuk "Jungsu," so that should be a hint!
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Oh man...I hope nothing happens to Hae >.<;;;
*_* oh man...Hannie makes me sad and I'm still upset over SJ being overworked so much and this isn't making it better for me *_* *doesn't know what I'm talking about anymore*
I hope HanHae works out soon =]
Fighting!
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And I do wish they would give SuJu a break, the boyz need sleep!
Hope my next chapter is worth the wait!
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