FIC: Against All Odds (Chapter Eleven)

Nov 25, 2008 16:34

Ohayo, minnasan, I hope everyone out there in Cyberland is doing well! Thank you to everyone who commented on my "Falling Feathers" ficlet, I'm so glad you enjoyed it ( Read more... )

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fifteen_half November 26 2008, 00:39:01 UTC
Noooooo! Hannie don't die!XD

I understand Donghae's pain, and it isn't his fault for reacting like that, but what he did really hurts. I hope that after a while he'll be able to really open up to Hannie and talk. Hannie's doing everything he could, after all. And he's right. They can't just suddenly go back to Tokyo like that. Wah! Donghae, how could you?T_T

I loved the part where Hannie said 'I lost my life' and the last sentence of that part, the 'losing Shiwon had been the precipice...' because they hurt. You were able to express that really well and now I'm so sad for Hannie. Because of Hae's reaction, I think he still has some left over feelings for Takki (or maybe I'm just reading into it too much XD). Hannie had been able to tell Hae the secrets of his soul even back when they didn't know each other much, but Hae, even though he knows that Hannie loves him, is acting like that. Yeah, maybe I'm reading into it too much >_<

I loved every part of this chapter. Hannie and Donghae's 'fight' was heartbreaking. Takki meeting up with Eeteuk should be interesting. Especially since they don't seem to like each other much (I wonder why XD). And the man Hae was talking about, the one that didn't seem right, could be Rain, too, so that's interesting as well! Haha!

Can't wait for the next one! I wonder how Hannie will cope without Donghae. And if Donghae will know what he's doing to Hannie. Things are going to get much worse, aren't they?T_T

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miracleshining November 29 2008, 02:23:28 UTC
Thank you for those lovely words! I do look forward to reading you comments, they make my day!

Donghae's having a very difficult time as we can see. But he does know that he was hard on Hankyung, more so than he meant to be. There's a lot that our little Fish is dealing with when someone he was sure was dead just appears out of nowhere. He has so many unanswered questions.

As if Donghae still has feelings for Takki, well, that's to be revealed actually in the following chapter. There's much more to Takki also than meets the eye. But I can say that the HanHae has been through much, but they have a true and deep bond. After all, they've almost died for each other, ne?

Takki's meeting with Eeteuk has been something I've been DYING to write. After all, we know in the cafe in this chapter that Takki called Eeteuk "Jungsu," so that should be a hint!

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