SPN Fic: Travel Sized

Jun 24, 2006 12:52

Title: Travel Sized
Author: Mink
Rating: PG - Gen
Spoilers: General (for aired episodes only)
Disclaimers: SPN & characters are owned by their various creators.
Summary: Dean shares some advice and some soap with someone who needs both.

Travel Sized )

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tabaqui June 24 2006, 19:09:35 UTC
Ah, nice. And a bit sad, but hopeful. I like the 'insider' information grapevine, and poor Sam - tired.
*pet pet*

Teeny thing:He had dripped several large drops of water that trailed down the front of his white T shirt, leaving it with that strange translucency and all along side a black hand print smeared down to his stomach.

I just can't make thie whole sentence...make sense. After 'translucency' it kind of gets garbled.

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minkmix June 24 2006, 19:14:02 UTC
He had dripped several large drops of water that trailed down the front of his white T shirt, leaving it with that strange translucency and all along side a black hand print smeared down to his stomach.

Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm... How 'bout this:

He had dripped several large drops of water that trailed down the front of his white T shirt, leaving it with that strange translucency. The rest of it was flecked with axel grease, all along side a black hand print smeared down to his stomach.

Funny you should point out that part, I was looking at it like...Why am I talking about Dean in a wet T shirt contest....? ha ha! Maybe I'll just snip it out....

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tabaqui June 24 2006, 20:09:04 UTC
That works!
And no no! It's good to leave in - it's a little detail that you notice and completes the picture.
:)

*wet t-shirt contest...mmmmm....*

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minkmix June 24 2006, 19:19:37 UTC
btw, thanks for pointing that out! I'm pretty blind to my own incoherent-ness/typos/whatever after I've looked at something for a bit. :)

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tabaqui June 24 2006, 20:09:45 UTC
OH, dude, i so know that feeling. You've tweaked and re-read and poked and prodded and you totally miss the most glaring stuff sometimes. Heh.

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