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Wanna dance? - chap7 complete

May 23, 2016 10:22

Pairing: Min Su, a little side of Jae Chun and Top/Su
Lenght: No idea yet, but it will be a short fic.
Genre: Fluffy, High School, PG-13

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ztarplay June 1 2016, 16:49:10 UTC

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ztarplay June 1 2016, 16:51:05 UTC

P.S. I'm gushing over the mature Top-Chun hook up. So much better that what I had in mind! Eeep! <3

minesomine June 1 2016, 17:51:09 UTC

Lol! You had me laughing and with a stupid huge grin at every one of your comments. Thank you! That's great praise coming from you.

I didn't want Top to be a rebound and I wanted to have Su still do silly things even a little older. Hence the fast forward and Chun-Top meeting older n wiser.

ztarplay June 2 2016, 00:31:14 UTC

Oooh, I'm glad I made you giggle. Coz I was laughing so hard the entire time. I really love this.

But you know the best part? Girl, you have improved vastly throughout the course of this story. Little things mostly but still, being the grammar nerd that I am, I noticed and it made me happy. Hehe. Just don't ask me to point them out. It's not really necessary. Some things are just better left to your instincts and preferences. <3

I like the no rebound idea. It makes it that much sweeter.

minesomine June 3 2016, 08:51:56 UTC

I wanted this story to be mostly funny and feel-good ( ... )

minesomine June 3 2016, 08:21:47 UTC

Ooooohhh, that Jae gif. *melts*

It pays off to write this story to get gifs like these. Eheheh.

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