Lol! You had me laughing and with a stupid huge grin at every one of your comments. Thank you! That's great praise coming from you.
I didn't want Top to be a rebound and I wanted to have Su still do silly things even a little older. Hence the fast forward and Chun-Top meeting older n wiser.
Oooh, I'm glad I made you giggle. Coz I was laughing so hard the entire time. I really love this.
But you know the best part? Girl, you have improved vastly throughout the course of this story. Little things mostly but still, being the grammar nerd that I am, I noticed and it made me happy. Hehe. Just don't ask me to point them out. It's not really necessary. Some things are just better left to your instincts and preferences. <3
I like the no rebound idea. It makes it that much sweeter.
I wanted this story to be mostly funny and feel-good. I feel super accomplished to know I made people laugh or at least smile.
I do write on instinct. I can't over-think it too much. I'm re-reading the first chapters and yes, there's a slightly different flow to it. I can't pinpoint what or why. Perhaps because it started very descriptive and evolved to incorporate a lot more dialogue? Like you mentioned before, I cheat with the viewpoint, and in a story initially intended to be only from Junsu's eyes, but it's just for a few tiny bits. Eh. It's still easier for me to use the omniscient narrator and give glimpses into whichever character I want to at a given moment. Marking spoken speech according to the widely used "blabla" was very weird for me at first. I was very used to see and use [ - ]. Getting slowly better at it. Still need to remember to use italic for thoughts.
Oh, just went to check and this 7 chapter story was written spread over 3 years!!! I started it in 2014! Uau! I've been posting stories for 2 years and half now. How time flies!
[Can't stop smiling]
Have I mentioned how much I love you for this funny cute MinSu goodness? No? Oh....
I FUCKING LOVE YOU TO INFINITY AND BEYOND!
I WILL FART HEARTS AND PURPLE UNICORNS FOR YOU!
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
ZANKYUUUUUU~
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I didn't want Top to be a rebound and I wanted to have Su still do silly things even a little older. Hence the fast forward and Chun-Top meeting older n wiser.
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But you know the best part? Girl, you have improved vastly throughout the course of this story. Little things mostly but still, being the grammar nerd that I am, I noticed and it made me happy. Hehe. Just don't ask me to point them out. It's not really necessary. Some things are just better left to your instincts and preferences. <3
I like the no rebound idea. It makes it that much sweeter.
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I feel super accomplished to know I made people laugh or at least smile.
I do write on instinct. I can't over-think it too much. I'm re-reading the first chapters and yes, there's a slightly different flow to it. I can't pinpoint what or why. Perhaps because it started very descriptive and evolved to incorporate a lot more dialogue?
Like you mentioned before, I cheat with the viewpoint, and in a story initially intended to be only from Junsu's eyes, but it's just for a few tiny bits. Eh. It's still easier for me to use the omniscient narrator and give glimpses into whichever character I want to at a given moment.
Marking spoken speech according to the widely used "blabla" was very weird for me at first. I was very used to see and use [ - ]. Getting slowly better at it. Still need to remember to use italic for thoughts.
Oh, just went to check and this 7 chapter story was written spread over 3 years!!! I started it in 2014! Uau!
I've been posting stories for 2 years and half now. How time flies!
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It pays off to write this story to get gifs like these. Eheheh.
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