Wanna dance? - chap7 complete

[minesomine]

Pairing: Min Su, a little side of Jae Chun and Top/Su
Lenght: No idea yet, but it will be a short fic.
Genre: Fluffy, High School, PG-13

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[ztarplay]

[Can't stop smiling]

Have I mentioned how much I love you for this funny cute MinSu goodness? No? Oh....
I FUCKING LOVE YOU TO INFINITY AND BEYOND!
I WILL FART HEARTS AND PURPLE UNICORNS FOR YOU!
<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3
ZANKYUUUUUU~

[ztarplay]

P.S. I'm gushing over the mature Top-Chun hook up. So much better that what I had in mind! Eeep! <3

[minesomine]

Lol! You had me laughing and with a stupid huge grin at every one of your comments. Thank you! That's great praise coming from you.

I didn't want Top to be a rebound and I wanted to have Su still do silly things even a little older. Hence the fast forward and Chun-Top meeting older n wiser.

[ztarplay]

Oooh, I'm glad I made you giggle. Coz I was laughing so hard the entire time. I really love this.

But you know the best part? Girl, you have improved vastly throughout the course of this story. Little things mostly but still, being the grammar nerd that I am, I noticed and it made me happy. Hehe. Just don't ask me to point them out. It's not really necessary. Some things are just better left to your instincts and preferences. <3

I like the no rebound idea. It makes it that much sweeter.

[minesomine]

I wanted this story to be mostly funny and feel-good.
I feel super accomplished to know I made people laugh or at least smile.

I do write on instinct. I can't over-think it too much. I'm re-reading the first chapters and yes, there's a slightly different flow to it. I can't pinpoint what or why. Perhaps because it started very descriptive and evolved to incorporate a lot more dialogue?
Like you mentioned before, I cheat with the viewpoint, and in a story initially intended to be only from Junsu's eyes, but it's just for a few tiny bits. Eh. It's still easier for me to use the omniscient narrator and give glimpses into whichever character I want to at a given moment.
Marking spoken speech according to the widely used "blabla" was very weird for me at first. I was very used to see and use [ - ]. Getting slowly better at it. Still need to remember to use italic for thoughts.

Oh, just went to check and this 7 chapter story was written spread over 3 years!!! I started it in 2014! Uau!
I've been posting stories for 2 years and half now. How time flies!

[minesomine]

Ooooohhh, that Jae gif. *melts*

It pays off to write this story to get gifs like these. Eheheh.