BF Update - Chapter 16: Intrusions and Reunions

[milena_d]

Title: Being Found
Author: Milena D.
Rating: T for now
Genre: Romance/Action/Adventure, etc. Daniel/Vala all the way ;)
SPOILERS: Up to Prometheus Unbound which is the 12th episode of Season 8, I believe. And although I’m not using any parts of Seasons 9 or 10 yet, I am taking the creative liberty of bringing the team together to include Daniel, Teal’c

Comments

review from acer-sigma

[anonymous]

Ah poor Woosley, He's going to end up in Dr. Lam's care if he keeps on hounding Vala. And I don't just mean from Vala giving him a stroke, cause I'm sure Daniel probably wants a piece of him too. Somehow I don't see the base rallying around to his defence

[milena_d]

Thank you! Next chapter will be up this weekend :D

[dreaminganita]

DAMM YOU, WOOLSEY!! DAMM YOU, UNAUTHORIZED OFF WORLD ACTIVATION!! *shakes fist*

Great chapter as usual! I love the UST between Vala and Daniel. And he getting all flustered... so cute!
I can't wait for the next one. ^_^ And I'm glad you updated, I really missed reading you. Yeah, RL can be a pain sometimes, right? Specially when it conflicts with your fanfic muse. But don't worry, I'm sure we all understand.

[milena_d]

Aw Thank you Anita! :D I've missed the fic world recently, stupid RL ;) But I've been sworn to post the next chapter this weekend so here's hoping :D

Oh, and don't worry, next chapter, there will be no Woolsey, no Off-world activation, no sudden asguard beam ;) Cross my heart :D

[hariboo]

Vala being paid to escape - aweomeness!

Woolly *snickers* Go, Vala, you tell him.

This was a sharp and lonely contrast to the blissful week of the cabin Great line. And HEE! you snuck in Cam/Lam again - a woman after my own heart. (I do the same in The Monster - repeatedly *wink*)

And you brought up the repercussions of Vala's torture. This is great, because like you stated it isn't a rarity in her life, so she just shrugs it off, more accurately she looks to shrug it off, but it stays with her. Deep her psyche, soul, mind, it's always with her. ANd then you brought up the subject that of Vala's sexual abuse. I like how you don't hide from the uglier facets of what has happened to Vala, you out them out there, you approach them and ultimately you show how instead of making weaker, they made her stronger.

heh - Carolyn giving out condoms. Oh, I hope she tells Cam ;)

“But darling, work is already over. It’s almost an hour past the end of work, see?” she asked, pointing to the clock on his wall.He hadn't noticed. Of course he

[milena_d]

Go Cam/Lam!! I mean, come on, that look the General gave them in TTTB(?) when they stepped out of an elevator together and Cam starts to, totally un-subtly, button his shirt ^_

[hariboo]

OMFG! I love you for mentioning that scene! ITA!!!

Vala whump is all good, because she in the end stands up for herself. As for the simpering Vala - I have to mention I hated, okay extremely disliked, the scene in Dominion when Reynold's comes back and he shouts at her and she half hide behind Daniel. Okay, it was fake, but still I - eeh!

She does have all important one and in the end I think that's what matters, because she does know b/w right and wrong, but she also know on where to bend a little right for some wrong ;)

The condom thing was gold!

[milena_d]

LOL!! I know eh??

In Dominion, I rather remember that scene not as "Vala hides behind Daniel" but "Daniel steps in front of Vala" ^_~ It works better in my head to have him all protective than having her cowering ^_^