Recreational Vibrato Manipulation (1/1)

Dec 11, 2011 20:43

Title: Recreational Vibrato Manipulation (1/1)
Author: jennynoname
Rating: PG-13 for some mild cursing and such
Word Count: 5,837
Spoilers: Everything that has aired is fair game. Some mild spoilers for 3x10, if you haven't seen it yet (which you should. In fact, go watch it right now. Do it.)
Disclaimer: I don't own "Community" or its characters. I only half-own ( Read more... )

author: jennynoname, fan: fiction, fan: fiction (completed)

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krystal214 December 12 2011, 01:59:00 UTC
I loved this story. I can't believe how this brought everything to the surface, but a battle like that over the study room and Annie will do that, I guess.

As much as I adored the rest, Abed always steals the scene for me when he's well-written like he was in your story. Especially this: "Before this gets so sentimental that I can’t properly reciprocate". Genius!

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jennynoname December 12 2011, 03:55:59 UTC
Aww thank you so much for your comment! A battle over the study room and Annie will definitely cause emotional reflexes to kick in... or, well, at least that's what I pretend. ;)

Thank you for the Abed compliment! He's one of the more difficult characters for me sometimes, and I'm glad you enjoyed that line. :)

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office_bluth December 12 2011, 02:07:23 UTC
Oh, wow, this is awesomely beta'd. You must have had an awesome person as your beta.

Oh, wait, jokes, this story was perfection and I did nothing.

Uuuuuuugh, I love this so much. It's so funny and so in character and so weird, but in the Community way, you know? Ugh, as usual, everything you do is perfection. I looooove you! :D

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jennynoname December 12 2011, 03:57:48 UTC
Oh hey... yeah just some random chick who should be studying for finals took time out of her schedule to beta it. No big deal. ;)

That's immediately what I thought when I looked back over writing this - I was like "Well, this is weird. But I think it works, because it's Greendale-esque in terms of weirdness," lol.

As usual: I love you a bajillion times over.

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office_bluth December 12 2011, 04:02:14 UTC
Oh, wow, that's pretty awesome of her. She sounds like a girl who took a half hour break from writing her paper at, like, 7 PM. She sounds cool, you should be best friends with her or something.

It's definitely Greendale-esque weird! The same people who had a Model UN-off would absolutely have a paintball war like this.

Also, who is that in the icon you posted with? I'm assuming it's from Once Upon a Time?

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jennynoname December 12 2011, 04:04:34 UTC
Gosh. I guess I'm going to have to be best friends with her. She seems too awesome to NOT be friends with. ;)

YES. It's Ginnifer Goodwin's Snow White character in OUAT. I absolutely adore her.

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midtega December 12 2011, 02:44:28 UTC
Outstanding work guys. As much as I love jeff, abed, troy's line, basically everybody in this. Glinda actually stole the show for me. Amazing an orginal character that never existed in the show has a profound effect on me feeling the stories emotional beats. Its funny I now think therapy can be beneficial if its them playing gun or a paintball game. So jennynoname writer and office bluth beta checker I give u an egg nog salute. Like I said, very well done.

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jennynoname December 12 2011, 03:59:15 UTC
Thank you for the compliments! Glinda is probably my favorite part of this fic, if I'm being honest with myself, lol. I really enjoyed writing her and especially writing her in the context of an outsider, highlighting everyone in the study group. :)

Thanks again for the kind review!

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office_bluth December 12 2011, 04:02:39 UTC
Oh, please, I did nothing! This was all Jenn's brilliance. I merely said, "Hey, you missed a comma," and that was that :)

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sinecure December 12 2011, 06:47:57 UTC
I think Glinda should get into Britta's Psych class if she's not already there. Nice job, Glinda! Nice job, jennynoname as well. Awww, Jeff. The poor guy is afraid of being abandoned. *pets Jeff*

Hmm. I only spotted one, and part of it repeated later. Nice usage though! Yay! One prompt has a home, I'm thrilled. :)

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jennynoname December 12 2011, 13:36:27 UTC
Glinda TOTALLY would be in a Psych class with Britta. Who knows - maybe she's already there and Britta hasn't realized it yet? This season I just consistently want to hug Jeff and that's the first season that I can honestly say that. He's just so adorable.

I assume the one you found was the one about Jeff being good and it buried somewhere deep down. The other one was this little exchange. ;)

Glinda pursed her lips and shook her head before bursting into a giggle. “You never really learn, do you?”

Smirking, Jeff replied: “Not if I can help it.”

Glinda seemed to contemplate this momentarily, before she rose from her chair and extended her hand to the man. “Sadly, I can get on board with that.” She raised her eyebrows daringly: “Lunch?”

Thanks again for the awesome dialogue prompts! :D

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jennynoname December 12 2011, 14:53:14 UTC
Haaa, just kidding. That's the only one in there, I believe. I think I had another one in but then took it out for some reason...

Silly Jennifer.

At any rate, still - thank you for the dialogue!

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fangirl_101 December 12 2011, 14:57:51 UTC
So much love for this. "He's like ... the Elder Wand of students." lolol that was classic Troy!

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jennynoname December 12 2011, 15:20:55 UTC
Aww thank you! Troy is seriously my favorite. And I can never resist throwing a HP reference in. ;)

Thanks for the review!

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