Comments | mijan: Fic: "The Needs of the Few" (21/23)

mijan

Fic: "The Needs of the Few" (21/23)

Apr 18, 2013 00:12

Title: "The Needs of the Few"
Canon characters/Pairing(s): Kirk & McCoy, Pike, Finney
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6,000
Warnings: Foul language, political situations, military stuff.
Summary: As cadets on a summer internship, Kirk and McCoy are supposed to keep their eyes open and their mouths shut. As far as Bones is concerned, that’s just plain ( Read more... )

academy series, fanfic, rating: pg-13, star trek, tnotf

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mijan April 20 2013, 19:34:23 UTC

There was indeed a lot to process. That's an important part of the story, and I don't like letting that slip. Also, feel free to run on as much as you like. I enjoy seeing how people react to my writing. That's half the fun! :)

rubymiene April 18 2013, 06:56:07 UTC

Oh Johan ::wibbles:: What a wringer of a chapter! (and the last one too!)
And poor poor Jim and poor poor Bones. ::snuggles them both::

(Now they need to get together and make with the comfort sex)

mijan April 23 2013, 03:34:10 UTC

I really loved Johan as a character. I'd love to draw a sketch of him. Hell, I'd love to show people what all my characters look like. I try to give descriptions without getting too caught up in gritty details. But still, yeah, Johan is one of my favorite secondary characters I've written.

And... comfort sex? Why do you think I write my adult-rated spinoff series? :D

:) killpurakat April 18 2013, 14:43:27 UTC

You are very welcome, but no thanks are really necessary. Just keep allowing me to read your fics and squeal over them (and not think I'm weird for squealing). :)

Can't wait for more, BTW!

Re: :) mijan April 23 2013, 03:22:02 UTC

Why would I think you're weird for squealing? I'm just as squeal-tastic about fics as anyone!

sickbay23 April 18 2013, 17:13:58 UTC

Yet another great chapter, thank god Jim is awake and fine now, but he miss Bones and his first thoughts are about his comrads, he and Bones will allways take care of other people, before they take care of themself. Bones finally got some sleep, even with help. These chapter is so full of emonations :) looking forward to the next chapter :)

mijan April 23 2013, 03:21:24 UTC

Yep, things are starting to come together after everything fell apart. I love playing with emotions for my characters. Really, that's the point, isn't it? :)

More material coming soon!

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mijan April 23 2013, 03:20:08 UTC

That's because action without emotion is meaningless, and emotion with out action is pointless. Gotta have both! :)

And yeah, foreshadowing. I tend to do that. LOL.