Fascination's End (1/8)

[mickeylover303]

I'm sorry I failed to get this out in time, but Happy Belated Birthday, syrraki !  I hope you don't mind that I used your birthday as an excuse the inspiration I so desperately needed to finish.  Although I'll certainly take no responsibility if, by the end, your face mirrors some variation of "wtf did I just read?"  d(*⌒▽⌒*)b

Epic one-shot is epic in

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[syrraki]

!!!!!! please, feel free to use my birthday (anniversary, weekends) as reasons to write!!!

INTRIGUING PREMISE

i am a bit of a sucker for naruto and sakura... i love how all the little things she does affect him. and what is going on here with sasuke? naruto hasn't spoken to him in months, hmm? WEARING GLOVES, HMM?

I like the team seven focus. although i hope kakashi makes an appearance!

keep going with the writing, okay! and don't worry about needing to add anything. Your balance of details-action is really good! :DDDDD

[mickeylover303]

Yes, yes, and yes! I'm such an subconscious NarutoSakura shipper. I don't even know what to do with myself. If only Sasuke wasn't there. *sighs*

Unfortunatey, not much of Kakashi, but I have another fic for him and the rest of Team Seven. I have to give into my love for Kiba for this one.

Surely, will do, although I'm sorry about the excess odds and ends I'm still cutting out. So unprofessional, but I need to get this thing done or it will sit on my computer forever and a day. Other than that, I'm glad it's okay for you so far. ^^

[syrraki]

“Help you what-get into Sasuke’s pants?” Hands held out in front of him, Kiba eyes go wide. He starts shaking his head, fast enough that it almost makes Naruto dizzy. “No way, man! I’m not helping you get into that guy’s pants!”

THIS LINE :D

[mickeylover303]

Thank you. That was totally a Freudian slip. (^_^')

wow

[anonymous]

youre such a brilliant writer and this promises to be another amazing series, perhaps my favorite from you

Re: wow

[mickeylover303]

Oh, thank you very much. ^^;;