Comments | michellek: Private Practice, General Series, Random One, Prompt #4. Definition

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Private Practice, General Series, Random One, Prompt #4. Definition

Oct 06, 2008 19:28

Title: Maybe This is a Prelude to Moving On
Author: michellek
Challenge: drabble123
Fandom: Private Practice
Pairing: Cooper/Violet, Cooper/Charlotte
Table: Random One
Prompt: #4. Definition
Rating: PG
Word Count: 200
Summary: Violet is afraid. Set during 'A Family Thing.'

Disclaimer: Not mine. Don't sue.

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private practice, drabble123 (claim #2), cooper/charlotte, cooper/violet

Comments 17

minttown1 October 6 2008, 23:36:24 UTC

This is very good, especially those last few lines.

michellek October 7 2008, 01:16:46 UTC

Thank you!

wickdstarcrunch October 7 2008, 02:35:05 UTC

o wow i love this!!

michellek October 7 2008, 02:54:38 UTC

Thank you! :)

wickdstarcrunch October 7 2008, 02:57:38 UTC

gelphiebean October 7 2008, 02:35:10 UTC

i like this! i love cooper. and congrats for writing something not 30 rock related! haha

michellek October 7 2008, 02:56:12 UTC

Thank you! I was bugged by Cooper initially but now I adore him. And ha, I am actually proud of myself for breaking out of 30 Rock for a brief moment. I've been wanting to write PP fic for a while.

severuslovesme October 7 2008, 03:17:12 UTC

I loved this! Very excellent characterization of Violet and Cooper's relationship, and in only 200 words! Would love to see more PP fic from you :D

michellek October 7 2008, 04:17:01 UTC

Thank you very much! I hope to write more. :)

firthgal October 7 2008, 04:39:28 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful! You've captured exactly what I believe Violet was feeling in the premiere. And that last line pretty much killed me. Loved it!

michellek October 7 2008, 04:55:58 UTC

Thank you muchly. :)