Even if it hurts, even if you make me cry, I love you...

Dec 29, 2010 00:42


Title: Even if it hurts, even if you make me cry, I love you...
Pairing: OnewxKey [OnKey]
Author: Read more... )

onew, nc-17, shinee, onkey, key, au

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rinni1905 December 27 2010, 07:30:45 UTC
Wow, your fic is really good, or I must say that it's wonderful, I really love the whole idea of your fic. It seemed that someone has supernatural power or OnKey's love for each other was becoming too strong for them, and it made them reflect of how much they should have cherished their love. Am I right? And this fic is one of the reason that I should love Quasimodo more now.

I really wanted to strangle the old lady because she ruined OnKey hotness, they're about to do something more but she just had to walk in the right time and interrupted them. Gah, I feel so frustrated with the last scene, I seriously want more, but I know that smut isn't easy thing to write, so I won't force you. The ending is perfect already and who knows that Jinki could become a sexy beast that ravaged Kibum like that, but I won't complain because I love him just like that.

The fic is really sweet and I just hope you could write more, the way you write touched me really much, when Jinki said that if it was alright to love Kibum, gah, my heart skipped a beat. I seriously in love with this fic!

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merryberry94 December 27 2010, 15:07:35 UTC
;____; That comment made my day >/////< Thank you so much!!! <33

I don't know what to say.... I'm too touched to think of something xD

I'm really happy that you like it and that you commented with such a long and touching thing ;__; You don't know how happy I am right now!! xD

I will see if I will write a sequel ^^ I hope some idea comes to me while I'm listening to music ^^

Thank you again~~~ <33

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