While bookshopping today...
I ran into a paragraph that was so redundant it was ridiculous. The writer took six sentences and each sentence was a different way to say the same thing. Grr.
I also came across some major head hopping. I haven't seen head hopping in so long it threw me off. Seriously, I was like, "What's wrong with this picture? And whose line is this anyway?" Then I remembered what this was. Grr.
What do I have to say about this?
Thank you awesome writer peeps for supplying me with your marvelous works of art. I have been completely spoiled by you and now only the best will do.
I also came across some major head hopping. I haven't seen head hopping in so long it threw me off. Seriously, I was like, "What's wrong with this picture? And whose line is this anyway?" Then I remembered what this was. Grr.
What do I have to say about this?
Thank you awesome writer peeps for supplying me with your marvelous works of art. I have been completely spoiled by you and now only the best will do.