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May 10, 2006 20:16


As the weather of our town changes, so it seems does the people. I just keep observing the people I know acting differently. I'm not saying that I don't change either, not that I would be able to tell, I'm just trying to find the source of this. This is just one of my random thoughts, but it u think that this relates to you, then you are most ( Read more... )

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ulixior May 11 2006, 01:54:51 UTC
Very deep. I found some of the imagry to be quiet effective, and the rhythmic devices were well used. The underlying metaphor was well thought out, and conveyed to the audience with the smallest hint of satire. The idea of hidden emotions was a little depressing, however, as I feel people should really open up and talk about what's bothering them. As always, I'm here to help.

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sondheimsharlot May 11 2006, 02:31:37 UTC
Hey! I appreciate your updates! Mostly because I'm far away and I rarely see anyone from Manistee and I remember when you were thisbig *really little* and I feel really old when I realize that WOW you're in high school!!!

But on a side note...I'll be back at the Ramsdell starting Monday and I'm sure I'll see you around at some point.

xoxo

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meme_cat117 May 11 2006, 11:39:30 UTC
I can't wait to see you again. I only caught glimpses of you last summer preforming in the dance shows but I never got to talk to you. Well, at the moment I should be going to school, so talk to you later. bye bye

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semi_omniscient May 11 2006, 14:49:04 UTC
I don't think anyone understands humanity, I think we just understand the pretense and facade that obscures reality.

Sort of like... The mask that we hide behind becomes who we are because it's more based in reality than our true selves are.

I don't know.

I'm just being gnomic.

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ring_lady_5 May 13 2006, 03:12:14 UTC
If you think I'm changing, tell me, because I sure don't see it.

I thought I could tell what was going on behind your smile, but I guess I can't if you say no one does.

Nice hairtie metaphor; it's so true!

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