DESTINY

[melibu7]

September 2011
The dim light from the moon is not helping with cold breeze sent chills through my bones as we stood outside fingers intertwined. Possibly for the last time. As the clock ticks and time moves on, there soon will be no us but just you or me. What do I know? Is this our destiny? If it is, well then destiny seems to be playing tricks on

Comments

[omgirly]

i love it. great job on your first attempt!

life has a way of moving us along paths filled with turns and straightaways and detours, and what doesn't happen right away, comes around again, eventually. we just have to be wise enough to recognize and jump headfirst when paths that crossed before meet up again.

you did a great job illustrating this.

can't wait until your next fic!

thank you!

[melibu7]

thank you! great to hear from you as I have always been an admirer of your fan-fictions. also dhiey23 did a great job on Fate so i was able to follow up on that.

anticipating your next one as well :)

[dhiey23]

as I told you before, this one is great..
and this is totally better than mine :)
this completes the 'FATE' one..

I cannot thank you enough for this :)

[eddisontrent]

Hello Melibu.

I like your story a lot, especially the descriptive parts and what sort of emotion that evokes in Yonghwa. And she has a boyfriend?? Anyway ... but maybe something you might want to consider for future stories is paragraphs. It makes it indefinitely easier to write the whole thing.

Best regards,
Trent.

[melibu7]

hi trent :) thanks for the feedback. will take note on that. yah seohyun had a bf for a while.

actually, its yong's side of the story from dhiey23's FATE (http://dhiey23.livejournal.com/7307.html) which tells seohyun's side of the story. i just thought of writing yong's POV cos i remember reading Midnight Sun (Edward Cullen's POV of the event in Twilight).

lastly, can't wait for your next update next week :)

Happy new year!

[babypillow]

came across it after reading your latest post in gogumafics .... love it.

like how it went through a span of 6-7 years of their journey together and apart.....

please keep writing!

[melibu7]

thanks for reading :) it was inspired by Fate (Hyun's POV) written by dhiey23. you should read it as well :)

[soshimunky]

Awesome! All I can say, seriously.
When it comes to Yongseo, every goguma wants them to be together but we know reality rules fantasy everytime. I can't help but be a realist. But this fic is trying to kill that realist in me and invent a completely delusional goguma-mind instead.
Thank you for writing such a lovely fic ^^

[melibu7]

hahaha... who knows it might just work in that way. but that tragic hopefully. afterall, if you watch enough k drama there are bound to be a few that will have a happy ending after 5-6 years later.

in case, this is Hyun's POV, from the original creative brains behind the story - http://dhiey23.livejournal.com/7307.html