Friday - hang onto your pants.. or not.

Jun 05, 2009 07:58

For your perusal. Consider the Stealth Blowjob.

I feel John's covert ops skills are highly under-utilized. Trained. Focused. Effective. Deadly.

*discrete cough* If a little of BugJohn slipped in well then... *loosen's collar*

b-j friday, fic

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The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 5 2009, 19:43:41 UTC
Rodney glanced at his watch when he saw John enter his quarters and move towards him with purpose. Shit. That late? And he was nowhere near being done.

"I'm sorry, John," Rodney said. And really, he was. This thing he had with John, well, at least the physical part of it, was still new enough that Rodney hated to have to disappoint him. And himself, for that matter. Because, well, John.

"I've got to debug this program and get it up and running before Radek's test run in the morning. And it was working fine until yours truly made a few tweaks and somehow broke it. It's just a simple matter of going back through the...hey!" Rodney grabbed both armrests with his hands as John suddenly spun his chair around and away from the desk. "What the...?"

He felt his mouth fall open as John casually dropped to his knees, pushing the chair all the way back against the desk and then he gently pushed aside Rodney's knees to make room for him. He placed his hands on Rodney's thighs and glanced up at him through a fringe of hair.

Rodney started to speak, found his mouth unaccountably dry, swallowed, and tried again. "What are you doing?"

A slow grin sizzled across John's features. "Giving you a blow job. What does it look like?" He reached for Rodney's fly and unbuttoned the waistband. Rodney felt his cock surge in response. John just grinned and cupped him through his boxers. Rodney could not help it--he slumped back in the chair, spreading his legs as wide as he could, pushing his hips forward as he tilted his head back and closed his eyes with a sigh.

This...this was unheard of. Not that John was selfish in bed by any means, but what they had going between them was pretty matter-of-fact. Hand jobs mostly. Stress relief. A buddy-fuck. And to be truthful, Rodney was pretty sure that it meant more to him than to John. And Rodney was usually the one worshipping at the Alter of Sheppard--not the other way around.

When he felt John's hand take hold of his cock he had to open his eyes, he had to watch. John smiled up at him again, as though he knew what Rodney was thinking, and then opened his mouth and took Rodney in. Just like that. Warmth and wetness surrounded Rodney, engulfed him. John held him in place with his left hand as he worked Rodney's cock steadily and with purpose with his mouth. Rodney found himself digging into the carpet with his heels, giving himself purchase to lift his pelvis even higher when John reached down and began to fondle Rodney's balls as well.

The sight of John's dark head bent over his cock, the way John's cheeks hollowed as he applied suction, the way the light cast a golden gleam to his eyes when he pulled off to give Rodney a wicked smile and then nuzzled the end of Rodney's cock until he could capture it in his mouth once more brought Rodney to the edge more than once.

end part one

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 5 2009, 19:44:13 UTC
part two:

But it was the sound that did him in. John was a silent lover. Perhaps he'd learned that in the military; Rodney didn't know. But just as Rodney felt the steady climb of tension in his body with the approaching orgasm, John made this little needy moan as he slurped down even further along Rodney's shaft and that did it. Rodney came hard and fast before he could even warn John that it was about to happen.

John gagged slightly and pulled off, wiping his mouth with one hand while finishing off Rodney with the other.

"Sorry," he said sheepishly when Rodney was done. "I always have a bit of trouble with that part." He flushed, a bright red band of color across his cheekbones and lighting up his eartips as well.

"You don't do that very often do you?" Rodney tucked himself back in and zipped his pants up again as John sat back on his heels.

"Um, no." John looked a little crestfallen. "It shows, huh?"

Rodney fisted John's t-shirt at the collar, twisting the material as he hauled John up his body for a kiss. He could smell himself on John's skin; taste himself in John's mouth.

"It shows," Rodney agreed in all seriousness when he pulled back, still holding John inches away from him. "It shows everything."

John flushed again and dropped his gaze, only to lift his eyes up again a moment later with something sharp contained within, something like defiance and a challenge.

"Yeah," Rodney agreed again, releasing his hold on John. "Me too. So explain to me what we are doing still dressed and not on the bed?"

John sank into his chest, dropping his head to Rodney's shoulder. Rodney could feel his laughter and relief.

~fin!

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ outsideth3box June 6 2009, 00:58:51 UTC
"It shows," Rodney agreed in all seriousness when he pulled back, still holding John inches away from him. "It shows everything."

With that sentence you turn this into something very NOT matter-of-fact, indeed.

Lovely.

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 6 2009, 02:00:37 UTC
yay! That was the idea--I'm glad it worked! Thanks!

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ goddess47 June 6 2009, 01:12:16 UTC
"Yeah," Rodney agreed again, releasing his hold on John. "Me too. So explain to me what we are doing still dressed and not on the bed?"

I love the not-talking-about-it that says so much....

Lovely!

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 6 2009, 02:07:58 UTC
I jokingly tell myself I'm going to write a story some day where John and Rodney carry on an entire conversation without actually saying anything...
:-)

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ melagan June 6 2009, 01:40:51 UTC
Oh my this is delicious.

"It shows," Rodney agreed in all seriousness when he pulled back, still holding John inches away from him. "It shows everything."

*heart-clench in the best way*

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 6 2009, 02:12:11 UTC
*beams at you ridiculously*

Thanks!

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ chkc June 6 2009, 02:18:04 UTC
Oh wow. *fans self*

I especially love that John is able to convey what he feels to Rodney with no words at all. And that Rodney gets it in the end! <3

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 6 2009, 02:45:34 UTC
I completely understand John's reticence. So I love it when the two of them are inarticulate and yet communicating. But I love your icon here even more! Yum...

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ pixiequeen10thk June 6 2009, 18:15:43 UTC
Wonderfully hot!

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 6 2009, 19:16:48 UTC
Thank you! :-)

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ neevebrody June 9 2009, 22:01:31 UTC
Oh, how perfect! I love that John just does it and then at the end with the.... and the.... because.... yeah, me too. So them.

the way the light cast a golden gleam to his eyes when he pulled off to give Rodney a wicked smile and then nuzzled the end of Rodney's cock until he could capture it in his mouth once more brought Rodney to the edge more than once.

nnngggrrhhhh - I'm not at all surprised.

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 11 2009, 00:20:06 UTC
Of course, reading that now I can only find fault with the sentence structure. But I'm pleased that the idea came across. Because, yeah. That's a nice image, isn't it?

I'm in love with BJ Fridays--thank you guys so much for hosting them and letting me play too!

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ melagan June 11 2009, 00:44:48 UTC
I can only find fault with the sentence

Passion over grammar babbbyyy. Sometimes you just need to run with inspiration. Woohooo. You can always pretty things up later to post to a comm.
Prime WooHoo example:

pt 1
pt 2
pt 3
pt 4

If I haven't mentioned it, I will now. *BIG FAT WELCOME HUGS*

this version works for me in a way the "cleaned up" posted to comm version can't begin to touch. Yes raw, and utterly perfect because of it

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Re: The Matter-of-Fact BJ sgamadison June 11 2009, 01:25:30 UTC
Okay, this? This must be saved for a time when I can savor it and delight in all the offerings--not when I'm in the throes of packing for another out of town trip. I plan to be back, oh yes indeedy.

And you've sold me on the appeal of raw--I commend you!

And thanks for the welcome. :-)

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