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meicailya

Conceptions - 8.b

Aug 23, 2008 06:51

Ratchet's Intermission - Take Two
Ratchet deals with a medical-mechanical miracle and really wishes he didn't have to. And Prime's a jerk :'(
1, 2, 2.b, 3, 4, 4.b, 5, 6, 7, 7.b, 8, 8.b

( -- and Primus have mercy on your sorry painted hide 'cause Bumblebee certainly won't! )

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karaq August 23 2008, 16:50:03 UTC

:-)

Aw, poor Sam. No wonder he fainted and went into shock. Protective!Bee is the love. Seriously. And I like the fact that he isn't a little innocent naive Autobot as portrayed in some fics. Uhh.. I wonder what Bee will have "time" for now? (Darn all those subtle hints I NEED answers for!)

You were right about Prime being a bit of a prick. No wonder the Hatchet is angry.
The autobots portrayel of Sam was, I found, rather surprising. No prisoners indeed...

Lolz. You made me wanna hug Ironhide. "I can shoot it". Hehe. :-) Abandoned with the twins? Poor guy. XD

Prowl's tragedy? Ohhh... interesting. As a matter of fact I was wondering... Is there a chance we get to see OTHER well-known (beside Arcee) autobots (and/or Decepticons) in this story?

....I THINK I had some other questions, but now I can't remeber them. Darn.

More soon please! ^^

~KaraQ

meicailya August 23 2008, 19:42:48 UTC

[My] Sam and Bumblebee were made for each other. "TOUCH AND DIE", srsly4rlz, none of this hyperbole crap ( ... )

karaq August 24 2008, 18:57:59 UTC

Oh yeah.. this sentence: "...even during the few times the mech glitched and had a psychotic episode..."
made me go a bit Whut? Like programming gone wrong or perhaps something like humans seeing red and going into rampage?
I'm stupid, I know... but the concept of giant alien robeots confuses me a bit (Transformers were never shown in television in Denmark), and it continues to baffle me, that you write GIANT ALIEN ROBOTS so darn WELL and descriping the programming, codes and so on into such details... wow! O_o

~KaraQ

meicailya August 24 2008, 19:44:38 UTC

Exactly like you said it. Some event triggers a program or the data input (from whatever the Transformer in question is seeing or hearing) causes an internal conflict in their perception of the world. So, you could see it as going into a rage, or having a nervous break down.
So long as it's only a triggered event (Say, an 'if' clause is fulfilled), or a data input issue, simply closing the program and restarting it would fix the problem and put an end to the 'psychotic episode'.

Haha, you're not stupid. Remembering that the Transformers are really robots is hard for some people -- they just find 'analogs' to human functions and that's all. Which is fine, unless you're me and can't stand to NOT over-complicate things.
I play up a lot more on the 'robot' side of things compared to some other writers, so I can understand if it's confusion. Never hesitate to ask me something! It let's me know when I start being too obscure, haha. 8D

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mattie_scary August 23 2008, 17:35:03 UTC

aww i did not want optimus to be mean anyway thats okay still good fic.

meicailya August 23 2008, 19:10:39 UTC

Well, I did justify his 'meanness'. Since the story revolves around Sam and Sam basically has free reign to stay as far away from Prime as he wants (and oh boy does he), you shouldn't see much of Prick!Prime.

ibythetide August 23 2008, 23:42:56 UTC

"I can shoot it," Ironhide offered immediately.

lovelovelovelove! you do good things with a story. can't wait for the next part.

catc10 August 24 2008, 01:46:37 UTC

This is like a whole chapter! WIN!
ME

solidor_scion August 25 2008, 09:52:26 UTC

Great chapter/interlude ^_^

Prime really should be more careful. He should know better than to piss off a medic.

They put you back together so they know the best ways to take you apart.

meicailya August 25 2008, 12:20:34 UTC

Haha -- oh, that gave me mental images I didn't really need. (Ratchet controls the growth of the 'masks' ... so, yeah, don't make him angry)

See, Prime has forgotten this. Ratchet figured it was counter productive to take apart Megatron's enemy -- but Megs is dead now. Soo ... lolz.

bloody_american August 31 2008, 11:04:23 UTC

"(What did you do?)" the young mech demanded shrilly, practically wrenching Ratchet's lovely doors off as he charged in and almost literally threw himself at the boy.

BEE IS SO WOOBIE~ :3

Ironhide is so amusing. I love that he always wants to blow shit up. He should look into getting a job in construction, heh. XD

meicailya August 31 2008, 14:15:06 UTC

Bee: Mai name is BBB, you trauma'd my squishie, PREPARE TO DIE

I love Ironhide, too. I don't know how canon he is to the movie, but mai ironhidu~ knows the science of KABOOM well ... if it can't be fixed with the application of firepower and boom, he doesn't want anything to do with it!
Lol construction~ more like DEMOLITION, BABE! 8D

bloody_american September 17 2008, 00:11:31 UTC

LOLOLOL YES! That's pretty much what it seemed like. So cute. So woobie. <3

LOL Yeah, demolition is what I meant. But my mind had a little bit of dyslexia that day and/or I couldn't remember the word for it (that happens a lot sometimes).

What kind of truck is Ironnhide? Because he totally should have been the one with the wrecking ball attached. It's not a cannon but, you know, in the off hours when he's not with the rest of the Autobots fighting Decepticons he could have, like, a real job. One that he would enjoy!