Conceptions - 8.b

Aug 23, 2008 06:51

Ratchet's Intermission - Take Two
Ratchet deals with a medical-mechanical miracle and really wishes he didn't have to. And Prime's a jerk :'(
1, 2, 2.b, 3, 4, 4.b, 5, 6, 7, 7.b, 8, 8.b

-- and Primus have mercy on your sorry painted hide 'cause Bumblebee certainly won't! )

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karaq August 23 2008, 16:50:03 UTC
:-)

Aw, poor Sam. No wonder he fainted and went into shock. Protective!Bee is the love. Seriously. And I like the fact that he isn't a little innocent naive Autobot as portrayed in some fics. Uhh.. I wonder what Bee will have "time" for now? (Darn all those subtle hints I NEED answers for!)

You were right about Prime being a bit of a prick. No wonder the Hatchet is angry.
The autobots portrayel of Sam was, I found, rather surprising. No prisoners indeed...

Lolz. You made me wanna hug Ironhide. "I can shoot it". Hehe. :-) Abandoned with the twins? Poor guy. XD

Prowl's tragedy? Ohhh... interesting. As a matter of fact I was wondering... Is there a chance we get to see OTHER well-known (beside Arcee) autobots (and/or Decepticons) in this story?

....I THINK I had some other questions, but now I can't remeber them. Darn.

More soon please! ^^

~KaraQ

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meicailya August 23 2008, 19:42:48 UTC
[My] Sam and Bumblebee were made for each other. "TOUCH AND DIE", srsly4rlz, none of this hyperbole crap ( ... )

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karaq August 24 2008, 18:57:59 UTC
Oh yeah.. this sentence: "...even during the few times the mech glitched and had a psychotic episode..."
made me go a bit Whut? Like programming gone wrong or perhaps something like humans seeing red and going into rampage?
I'm stupid, I know... but the concept of giant alien robeots confuses me a bit (Transformers were never shown in television in Denmark), and it continues to baffle me, that you write GIANT ALIEN ROBOTS so darn WELL and descriping the programming, codes and so on into such details... wow! O_o

~KaraQ

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meicailya August 24 2008, 19:44:38 UTC
Exactly like you said it. Some event triggers a program or the data input (from whatever the Transformer in question is seeing or hearing) causes an internal conflict in their perception of the world. So, you could see it as going into a rage, or having a nervous break down.
So long as it's only a triggered event (Say, an 'if' clause is fulfilled), or a data input issue, simply closing the program and restarting it would fix the problem and put an end to the 'psychotic episode'.

Haha, you're not stupid. Remembering that the Transformers are really robots is hard for some people -- they just find 'analogs' to human functions and that's all. Which is fine, unless you're me and can't stand to NOT over-complicate things.
I play up a lot more on the 'robot' side of things compared to some other writers, so I can understand if it's confusion. Never hesitate to ask me something! It let's me know when I start being too obscure, haha. 8D

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Re: The Twins meicailya August 25 2008, 16:33:57 UTC
8D Glad you like!

More like AUTOSTRADA, HAHAHAHA *is shot*
I actually wrote a bit of a "tag" scene with the twins. It's kinda hard for the Autobots to hide in disguise, get anywhere, and NOT end up playing socializing games, lolz.

Aw shucks~ well, I hope I can hold to that! I'm really nervous now that we're really into the technical/medical side of it. *WOEFACE*

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