Just A Simple Highschool Fuck: Help help?

[meheartyunho]

Helloo! No, I'm not here to start posting my stories, though I do have something to post. You all remember that I talked about 'Just A Simple Highschool Fuck', right? Well, when I tried to write it it turned out something like this. So read this, think of it as a prologue and then read my questions? ^^" i really need your help with this you guys!

Comments

[kiyazawa]

glad to know you posted something, finally,,
hahaha...
off to read.. :DD

[kiyazawa]

wew, wew, weeeewww..
yup, it turned out isn't like i imagine,,,
but it's not in a bad way.. :DD
you said that it would be a simple HS fic, and this isn't nearly 'simple' at all..
hahaha...
this seems a lil bit dark and thrilling tho,,
a bad bad boy jaejoong,,,
but it's good, i love rebel jae, kinda sexy for me,, XDD (don't mind me)
so, yunho would be a 'saviour' for jae?? really can't wait to read that... :p
and yes, of course i want you to continue this, please...
:DDDD

[meheartyunho]

Haha yes I knoooow XD I'm so impossible *sighs*
It's just that I couldn't get JJ like I wanted him to be D: I wanted him to be bad, but it all turned out so BORING. And it won't be all emo-ish like this all the time, I'll try to change my writing up a bit so it won't be the same all the time *which I think it is*
I think I'll have to struggle slightly with this one, but it will still be a changed from Eternal which was what I originally wanted :3 The fact that I happened to stumble into something a bit deeper is just a bonus I guess ^-^

Thank you so muchhh :D I'm glad you want to read it!

Well, I don't know if he'll be his saviour. At least not intentionally. He'll help him, but he won't exactly be the typical knight in shining armour. He'll still be that guy on a motorcykle, the easygoing type that just gets along with everyone. We'll see how it all turns out, nee? Thank you ^^ <3

[kiyazawa]

how could you say jaejoong is BORING??!! LOOOL
he'll never be a 'boring' for me.. hahahaha.. (please don't mind me again) XDD
anyway, actually i'm captivated by jaejoong's personalities tho,,
from what you said, with so many things happened in his past must be affected his present act, and that's what interest me,,, :p
i want to know what exactly happen to him that made him acted like that (i must say that jae really has a 'dark' personality here) >__<

you want to change your writing style? hemh,, that's good to know,
it would be a challenge for any writer, and i'm sure you can do just fine,,
will look forward for that.. ^.^

Yunho in motorcycle??!!! O_______O
*drools*
PERFECT!!! :DDD
that's exactly what i imagine Yunho would be,,, hahahaha...

[cinderellaboy10]

you should continue writing this!! its really interesting.it keeps us readers wanting more. and as long as there will be lots and lots and lots of yunjae and them being together in the end then this story will make me happy. hahahah. :D

[meheartyunho]

Weee ^^ Hahah no worries, the original plot of them smexing it up will still be there >D Thank youuu <3

[cinderellaboy10]

oh one question tho, is this fic gonna have fluff? im really a sucker for yunjae fluff. hahahha.

[meheartyunho]

Hmm it depends on how you define fluff. It will probably be more romance than fluff. Snce neither of these characters are particulary 'fluffy' XD Yunho smokes and i don't even know what, he's not really the handsome prince in this XD (although he's hot as damn >D)

[riseofnoona]

I'm definitely interested (that's no surprise, you could write about the life of a flowerpot, i'll read it) \o/

Do it as you pictured it in your head, the haters can go read something else. It's too short to really point out if it's good or not for the personality of your characters, but so far JJ got all my attention =D

hope to get some more soon ;)

[meheartyunho]

hahah awww. Does that go for any author or just for me? *wink wink* ;D

Yeha, it's short right now, but it is pretty clear about Jaejoong. That he's the one in trouble, the one hiding behind someone else, someone cold when really he's all warm inside (just like yunho likes them haha xD)

It will probably take a (long) while before the rest will be up, but I'll try my best!

[riseofnoona]

considering the fact you just gave me at least 5 or 6 heart attack with 1095 days later, i'd say it's only you XD

Good job, now i got a mental picture of Jaejoong as a fondant au chocolat xD

[meheartyunho]

hahah x'DD I'm glad actually mehe (A)
hahahah well wouldn't that be just yummyyyy >D

[yunhos]

definately going to read this ^^
jaejoong's character is interesting...
i'm hooked, and yunho hasn't even been mentioned yet. XD
please continue! <3

[meheartyunho]

wee thank you! :D <33
Yeah Jae is really one of a kind, though he won't be all psycho and emo all the time XD Behind his little mask he's really warm which is what we'll slowly see as he learns how to handle his probs ^^

[yunhos]

you're welcome ^^
and i take it that yunho will be helping him get over his depression? :3

[meheartyunho]

haha maybeeeeeeeeeeeee XD We'll see how this turns out. Hopefully good haha

[ouji]

i almost thought jaejoong was crazy or had some kind of disorder of some sort O__o!! but then it's pretty reasonable if he hates himself he will use it toward others since no one really understands him... ;___;

i think the change of your writing is just a different perspective that people don't really see around school... so i think it's totally interest to see jaejoong with this type of badboy character :D

keep the yunjae lovin' coming!!!~ *___* can't wait for the actual story to begin :D

[meheartyunho]

Haha he's not crazy the poor thing, just can't really control himself I suppose~ ^^" And yes, he's just trying to make everything better for himself, but ends up ruining things for others ><

Mehehe it will definitely come >D thank youuu <3