Last Man on Earth

Jan 09, 2012 01:59


Title: Last Man On Earth

Characters: Sylar and Peter

Rating: PG-13 (some swearing, kissing)

Setting: Inside the Wall/S4

A/N: Shamelessly inspired by Game_byrd’s Wall Short Series (a drabble), Walled In/Seeing Stars, The Touch of Your Lips and a few other of her pieces including MBU.

A/N 2: A prequel to game_byrd's " Things Unsaid". And first entry of the ( Read more... )

sylar, mbu-inspired, pg-13, non-canon, heroes, fic, peter

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lornrocks January 10 2012, 10:54:46 UTC
Hmm, I like this a whole lot. Will you be writing more in this vein?

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means2bhuman January 11 2012, 00:49:07 UTC
I've got a setting, I just need to find...dialogue and content, as weird as that is. So I hope to be writing more in this vein, yeah! Thanks for commenting.

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dancingdragon3 January 10 2012, 17:58:49 UTC
Wow, that was some kiss! I love how you slowed down the action to describe every movement, thought, and feeling. I had my face inches from my computer screen! I am melting over here! Please tell me you are going to write the next hour of that scene!

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means2bhuman January 11 2012, 00:50:49 UTC
Really? Thank you. Everyone likes it and I thought it was only so-so.
I got a "Face Inches From The Screen"?! Wow!
Well, I hope to write more....can't say its the next hour...(Besides, is an hour enough for these two? ;)
Glad you enjoyed!

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game_byrd January 12 2012, 02:23:51 UTC
I'm in total agreement with Peter there: "That was nice" in a husky, sort of lust-saturated voice. That was all kinds of awesome! I love the descriptions of Sylar's feelings, both physical and emotional. Those are fantastic. They make it, entirely.

Plus, I'm going to have a pay a lot more attention to Peter's hands now when I rewatch!

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means2bhuman January 12 2012, 05:56:03 UTC
Thanks!

Milo's hands are the bomb. Peter's hand gestures are just cute all across the board. Don't get me wrong, I love ZQ's hands, too, but Milo's wins for some reason. They are a must watch!

I notice them as a woman (and, c'mon, men's hands are supposed to be a turn-on) and Sy notices them as hands are significant to him and he's a watchmaker himself.

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game_byrd January 14 2012, 20:08:11 UTC
Peter was just a big easy slut to begin with; and Sylar had yet to figure out how that was logical and non-hypocritical.

That's so true. I don't understand how it makes sense in my head, either. He's relaxed, he's comfortable with his sexuality, he knows what he wants, he's not ashamed to speak his heart, he's a big easy slut, and yet at the same time he's all about genuine emotions, deep and not-casual relationships ... I think it's that he wants to dive in deep every single time, and that he tries for that, giving every relationship his all, putting his heart out on the line time after time regardless of the risks. So yeah, he's a big easy slut, but he really means it.

It's part of what makes him so endearing!

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means2bhuman January 15 2012, 03:28:21 UTC
He's a GENUINE big, easy slut! I love it! "But he really means it...!" (I'm trying not to let my Sylar listen to that ( ... )

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game_byrd January 15 2012, 04:25:20 UTC
Oh man, I've seen that link before and yes, whoever put it together did a fantastic job on the facial expressions ( ... )

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dancingdragon3 January 15 2012, 04:53:13 UTC
I completely agree with your take on Peter. That's always been my view, too. The kind of guy that girls sleep with because he's cute but then he gets too romantic on them and smothers them. He doesn't act like they expect him too - like a jerk. They don't appreciate him.

Besides the actual sex factor, to me, it's always seemed like Peter was looking for someone to love him, keep him, and lead him. Nathan, Simone, Claude, Adam, Caitlin, Emma. Even Mohinder I think, early in season one. Peter just gloms onto the nearest body and follows them blindly. It seems only natural that he would do that with Sylar, too.

Except that I see that quality in Sylar as well - wanting someone to follow. Chandra, Angela, Author, Elle, Danko, those carnies, Peter. he is looking for connection even though he would never admit it. So I suppose that't what makes them click for me.

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Things Unsaid pingback_bot January 15 2012, 04:52:15 UTC
User game_byrd referenced to your post from Things Unsaid saying: [...] e Word count: ~2,800 Setting: The Wall. This is a companion piece to ’s Last Man On Earth [...]

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