Drabble 'Named and Claimed' by Jane Davitt McKay/Sheppard R

[janedavitt]

Title 'Named and Claimed'
Author janedavitt
Web page Jane's Stories
Pairing McKay/Sheppard
Rating Mild R
No spoilers.
malnpudl asked for a drabble with McKay calling Sheppard 'John' for the first time in public.

Comments

[bluebrocade]

WOW. Good drabbles say a lot with so few words and this one was great.

[janedavitt]

I have a not-so-secret passion for drabbles :-) Glad this one worked for you!

[darkhavens]

*cough*slashthedrabble*cough* :D

At first I thought it was McKay doing the panicking bit, but when McKay sighed I skipped back to the beginning and read it again, and I could imagine the incipient OMG! expression on John's face as he strove to be casual and not freak out. Love it!

[janedavitt]

Oh, I'll check that comm out; thanks! Love reading drabbles.

Glad you liked this one, with poor, stunned John.

[yin_again]

Fabulous, Janey! You rock.

[janedavitt]

Thank you! ::smooches:: Took me three goes to get it right, though...

[pionie]

Great drabble! Those last two words - killed me :)

[janedavitt]

The last bit's always the hardest so I'm glad that part worked for you; thank you!

[toniabarone]

*LOL* So cute and awwww-worthy! Thanks for this!

[janedavitt]

You're welcome! Glad it worked for you.

[lerah99]

This is so hot and there isn't even any porn in it! I love that you can create so much tension with so few words. Thank you so much for posting it.

[janedavitt]

I'm gnashing my teeth and weeping over the fact that I've been in the fandom a month and a half and have yet to write any proper smut. It's just not like me ::g::

Thank you for reading and commenting!