FFic: Redundant Chapter 33
An actual update this time. XD
I really hate asking, but feedback for this chapter would be most helpful. Specifically: I'm not sure if I've gotten Garrus' voice right. Insight from those who write Garrus regularly would be awesome. Feedback for anything else is also highly appreciated and always welcomed.
Title: Redundant
Chapter: 33 - Intercourse of Ill-Repute [past tense]
Featured Characters: Garrus, Williams, Alenko, Wrex, FemShep, Joker, Pressly
Warnings: Only the 2nd time I've tried to get into Garrus' head. Not beta'd. Hubby refuses to read any more. Hopefully, I caught all the typos.
Synopsis: We're FINALLY at Therum! Should we celebrate or run for the hills? Nah. Let Precious do his awesome bouncy thing. Also: Don't we all hate it when subtitles make very little sense?
(The sweltering heat of the planet reminded Garrus of, well, Hot Things.)
For those who might be interested in following:
Title: Redundant
Rating: M
Genre: Sci-fi/adventure/humor/action/drama/lust, jealousy and lecherous thoughts romance
Warnings: crude humor, adult language, graphic violence is graphic, adult situations, alien discrimination, drug use, rocks fall and people die, things blow up (you name it, and I've probably included it or have the intention of including it later)
Pairings Love Triangles: Alenko/FemShep/Liara, Williams/Joker/OC, Williams/Alenko/Shepard, everybody/everybody else/someone other than that (Wait, you mean Space Operas and Soap Operas aren't the same thing? ...Damn it.)
Summary: ME1 heaved at you like stinky flying turnips with emphasis on side quests, explosions and conversations not found while playing the game. Shenko subplot. Saren? Geth attacks? The end of civilization as we know it? Pfffssh. Don't worry. Rich Achievement Unlocked!
(Space is a cold bitch)
I really hate asking, but feedback for this chapter would be most helpful. Specifically: I'm not sure if I've gotten Garrus' voice right. Insight from those who write Garrus regularly would be awesome. Feedback for anything else is also highly appreciated and always welcomed.
Title: Redundant
Chapter: 33 - Intercourse of Ill-Repute [past tense]
Featured Characters: Garrus, Williams, Alenko, Wrex, FemShep, Joker, Pressly
Warnings: Only the 2nd time I've tried to get into Garrus' head. Not beta'd. Hubby refuses to read any more. Hopefully, I caught all the typos.
Synopsis: We're FINALLY at Therum! Should we celebrate or run for the hills? Nah. Let Precious do his awesome bouncy thing. Also: Don't we all hate it when subtitles make very little sense?
(The sweltering heat of the planet reminded Garrus of, well, Hot Things.)
For those who might be interested in following:
Title: Redundant
Rating: M
Genre: Sci-fi/adventure/humor/action/drama/lust, jealousy and lecherous thoughts romance
Warnings: crude humor, adult language, graphic violence is graphic, adult situations, alien discrimination, drug use, rocks fall and people die, things blow up (you name it, and I've probably included it or have the intention of including it later)
Pairings Love Triangles: Alenko/FemShep/Liara, Williams/Joker/OC, Williams/Alenko/Shepard, everybody/everybody else/someone other than that (Wait, you mean Space Operas and Soap Operas aren't the same thing? ...Damn it.)
Summary: ME1 heaved at you like stinky flying turnips with emphasis on side quests, explosions and conversations not found while playing the game. Shenko subplot. Saren? Geth attacks? The end of civilization as we know it? Pfffssh. Don't worry. Rich Achievement Unlocked!
(Space is a cold bitch)