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Story Or Series Title:The Micaela Trilogy The first story
The second story
There's some wonderful musical accompaniment to the stories too. Yay...
Fandom: Star Trek: The Next Generation
Culprit Author's Name: Shockingly, it's Micaela
Full Name (plus titles if any): Lt. Micaela Troi Leon
Full Species(es): Human
Hair Color (include adjectives): straight brown hair that reaches the middle of her back
Eye Color (include adjectives): large, dark brown eyes
Unusual Markings/Colorations: People mistake her for a Betazoid, even though she's human... and humans and Betazoids look almost exactly alike. Wow!
Special Possessions (if any):
Annoying Origin: Well, I don't want to ruin the story *cough* for anyone... but she's Deanna Troi's half sister! *gasp*
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: See above, and of course, because she looks like Deanna Troi, William Riker lusts after her
Annoying Special Abilities: To make people accept her and love her, and to have very big mood swings... and she likes CAPS to EMPHASIZE what she's SAYING!
Other Annoying Traits: Oh, she's so self-sacrificing... what a great person she is, letting Will Riker go back to Deanna. Thank you, Mary Sue.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Will caught up to Micaela and tried to explain .. to
apologize.
Micaela sobbed, but managed to speak through the tears. She raised her hand to stop him.
"Will, don't. I
always knew that there was an invisible wall between us. I just
didn't know that the wall was built by my sister. I have already
caused her enough grief by revealing my heritage. I can't take
away her imzadi as well. She hates me enough now, I will not add
to the hatred by being with you anymore. I know you both love
each other. Quit being stupid and proud and admit it to each
other that you belong together."
Micaela dropped her head.
Will put his hand under her chin and brought her face up to
his.
"Mic, the ball is in Deanna's court now. She knows how I
feel. She had to decide what to do about Worf. I really do care
about you, Micaela. You are an extraordinary woman. No woman,
other than Deanna, has come so close to capturing my heart. Are
you going to be okay?"
She reached up and kissed him lightly on the lips.
"Yeah, I
will be fine. You were never really mine to begin with. I knew
that. But we have had some great times, hadn't we?"
They had gotten close to the end of the survey when MacKenzie
asked Micaela if she would like to beam down with him to see the
actual planet before they departed. She readily accepted. She
was shocked when Robin mentioned to her later that no one on
board had been to Xenex before - not even Shelby.
Micaela began to feel warm all over her body once again as her
heart began to pound in her chest. She had been attracted to the
Captain since she first laid eyes on him. The attraction became
stronger the more she got to know him. He was a lost soul, not
unlike herself. She felt a connection to him. He stared at her
intently as a fire burned within his eyes. Her face was wet with
rain, her dark curls sticking to her features like ribbons.
Mac reached out to move a soft strand from her large brown
eyes and something caught them by surprise. MacKenzie took her
face with both his hands and pulled her lips to his.
Electricity crackled all around them as lightning danced just
outside the cave and currents ran through the veins of the two
inside the cave. They kissed each other gently, lovingly. They
completely devoured one another's warm wet lips and tongues. Mac
had his hands in Micaela's wet hair as she titled her head back.
He then moved his ministrations around from her mouth to her neck
and earlobe. Micaela was gasping with pleasure as he held her
long body against the rock wall with his own.
Thunder rumbled outside but it was not heard by the two.
Their pulses were pounding so hard inside their bodies that the
noise was blocked. Micaela moved her arms around Mac's waist and
pulled him into her as he continued nipping her neck.
He moved back to her mouth as their kisses deepened to the
point of ecstasy.
Micaela gasped, "Oh, Captain..."
That word was enough to snap Calhoun back to reality. He
stopped and looked into Micaela's face. He began to loosen his
hold on her and backed away slightly. Micaela saw the conflict
in his rugged features. She started to question what was going
on, what was wrong, when Mac put a finger to her lips.
I had to selectively paste that last part...
Micaela found her lying across her bed, crying. She went to
her and brushed the hair from her tear-stained face. Mic
whispered, "Oh, Dee. What happened? What was all this about?"
Micaela was doing her best to comfort her sister when Deanna
turned her fury upon her. She screamed, "Well, YOU are one of
the biggest problems!!! Why couldn't you have just stayed away?
You are a constant reminder to me and Mother as to Daddy's
infidelity as well as WILL'S!!!!"
Micaela was taken aback, "Deanna, that isn't my fault. Why
are saying such things? You and Will were not together when he
and I were. I didn't even know about you two then...I..I..."
Tears were streaming from Micaela's brown eyes as she backed
out of the room. Her heart was rent in two from Deanna's hurtful
words.
Maybe she was right, maybe she didn't belong here, maybe she
didn't belong ANYWHERE - she was just a BASTARD child. No one
would ever love her. No one could. She wasn't worthy. She ran
back to Calhoun.
His heart turned over at the distress she was going through.
He cried, "Micaela, Micaela...wait. Where are you going????"
She pulled away from him shouting, "Leave me alone!!! You
don't want me either...NO ONE wants me!!!!"
He tried to go after her, but he lost her in the crowd. He
tapped his communicator, , and he returned to his
ship to sort this out.
Most of the MS stuff is in the second story. The first one is just an annoying build-up to the crap in the second one.
The second story
There's some wonderful musical accompaniment to the stories too. Yay...
Fandom: Star Trek: The Next Generation
Culprit Author's Name: Shockingly, it's Micaela
Full Name (plus titles if any): Lt. Micaela Troi Leon
Full Species(es): Human
Hair Color (include adjectives): straight brown hair that reaches the middle of her back
Eye Color (include adjectives): large, dark brown eyes
Unusual Markings/Colorations: People mistake her for a Betazoid, even though she's human... and humans and Betazoids look almost exactly alike. Wow!
Special Possessions (if any):
Annoying Origin: Well, I don't want to ruin the story *cough* for anyone... but she's Deanna Troi's half sister! *gasp*
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: See above, and of course, because she looks like Deanna Troi, William Riker lusts after her
Annoying Special Abilities: To make people accept her and love her, and to have very big mood swings... and she likes CAPS to EMPHASIZE what she's SAYING!
Other Annoying Traits: Oh, she's so self-sacrificing... what a great person she is, letting Will Riker go back to Deanna. Thank you, Mary Sue.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
Will caught up to Micaela and tried to explain .. to
apologize.
Micaela sobbed, but managed to speak through the tears. She raised her hand to stop him.
"Will, don't. I
always knew that there was an invisible wall between us. I just
didn't know that the wall was built by my sister. I have already
caused her enough grief by revealing my heritage. I can't take
away her imzadi as well. She hates me enough now, I will not add
to the hatred by being with you anymore. I know you both love
each other. Quit being stupid and proud and admit it to each
other that you belong together."
Micaela dropped her head.
Will put his hand under her chin and brought her face up to
his.
"Mic, the ball is in Deanna's court now. She knows how I
feel. She had to decide what to do about Worf. I really do care
about you, Micaela. You are an extraordinary woman. No woman,
other than Deanna, has come so close to capturing my heart. Are
you going to be okay?"
She reached up and kissed him lightly on the lips.
"Yeah, I
will be fine. You were never really mine to begin with. I knew
that. But we have had some great times, hadn't we?"
They had gotten close to the end of the survey when MacKenzie
asked Micaela if she would like to beam down with him to see the
actual planet before they departed. She readily accepted. She
was shocked when Robin mentioned to her later that no one on
board had been to Xenex before - not even Shelby.
Micaela began to feel warm all over her body once again as her
heart began to pound in her chest. She had been attracted to the
Captain since she first laid eyes on him. The attraction became
stronger the more she got to know him. He was a lost soul, not
unlike herself. She felt a connection to him. He stared at her
intently as a fire burned within his eyes. Her face was wet with
rain, her dark curls sticking to her features like ribbons.
Mac reached out to move a soft strand from her large brown
eyes and something caught them by surprise. MacKenzie took her
face with both his hands and pulled her lips to his.
Electricity crackled all around them as lightning danced just
outside the cave and currents ran through the veins of the two
inside the cave. They kissed each other gently, lovingly. They
completely devoured one another's warm wet lips and tongues. Mac
had his hands in Micaela's wet hair as she titled her head back.
He then moved his ministrations around from her mouth to her neck
and earlobe. Micaela was gasping with pleasure as he held her
long body against the rock wall with his own.
Thunder rumbled outside but it was not heard by the two.
Their pulses were pounding so hard inside their bodies that the
noise was blocked. Micaela moved her arms around Mac's waist and
pulled him into her as he continued nipping her neck.
He moved back to her mouth as their kisses deepened to the
point of ecstasy.
Micaela gasped, "Oh, Captain..."
That word was enough to snap Calhoun back to reality. He
stopped and looked into Micaela's face. He began to loosen his
hold on her and backed away slightly. Micaela saw the conflict
in his rugged features. She started to question what was going
on, what was wrong, when Mac put a finger to her lips.
I had to selectively paste that last part...
Micaela found her lying across her bed, crying. She went to
her and brushed the hair from her tear-stained face. Mic
whispered, "Oh, Dee. What happened? What was all this about?"
Micaela was doing her best to comfort her sister when Deanna
turned her fury upon her. She screamed, "Well, YOU are one of
the biggest problems!!! Why couldn't you have just stayed away?
You are a constant reminder to me and Mother as to Daddy's
infidelity as well as WILL'S!!!!"
Micaela was taken aback, "Deanna, that isn't my fault. Why
are saying such things? You and Will were not together when he
and I were. I didn't even know about you two then...I..I..."
Tears were streaming from Micaela's brown eyes as she backed
out of the room. Her heart was rent in two from Deanna's hurtful
words.
Maybe she was right, maybe she didn't belong here, maybe she
didn't belong ANYWHERE - she was just a BASTARD child. No one
would ever love her. No one could. She wasn't worthy. She ran
back to Calhoun.
His heart turned over at the distress she was going through.
He cried, "Micaela, Micaela...wait. Where are you going????"
She pulled away from him shouting, "Leave me alone!!! You
don't want me either...NO ONE wants me!!!!"
He tried to go after her, but he lost her in the crowd. He
tapped his communicator, , and he returned to his
ship to sort this out.
Most of the MS stuff is in the second story. The first one is just an annoying build-up to the crap in the second one.