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Story Or Series Title: Princess Gangster. Is that a badass title or what?
Fandom: Astro Boy
Culprit Author's Name: Zuma12121
Full Name (plus titles if any): "Princess" Alyssa, leader of 'the Harpies', "the baddest gang in all of America". Yeah, didn't know street gangs were monarchies either.
Full Species(es): some kind of mutant/metahuman
Hair Color (include adjectives): not mentionned
Eye Color (include adjectives): not mentionned
Unusual Markings/Colorations: see Annoying Special Abilities
Special Possessions (if any): some kind of laser gun, a bunch of gang members/henchmen she calls her vassals, that talk in a middle-agey speech and call her "Your Highness". I guess in the future, medieval times will be the new hot thing in street culture. Her gang is also armed to the teeth with things like TNT, C4, swords and guns.
Annoying Origin: Where she came from is never really explained, the story starts with Alyssa being chased by Astro on Dr. "Elephant"'s orders, Alyssa claims the Doctor wants "either me dead, or he wants my powers at his disposal." Hmm, this Dr. Elephant must be Dr. Elefun's evil twin. She shoots at Astro with her laser gun, but the laser bounces back and hits her instead, knocking her out. Astro takes her back to the ministry of science to heal her, she escapes, gets back to her gang and they declare war on the Ministry of Science for hurting their precious little princess.
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Dr. "Elephant" want to capture her because she has these powers, but he never clearly says what he wants to do with her. Astro chases her around like a love-sick puppy.
Annoying Special Abilities: I'll let Dr. "Elephant" explain: "You see Astro, Alyssa here is an insanely powerful mutant, she can move objects with her mind, go into other people's mind & control them, & she can also take from others, if she wants to, she can kill someone just by touching them, she can absorb their life-force." So she's a Jean Grey/Rogue rip-off.
Other Annoying Traits: Heals herself when Astro touches her, because apparently you can steal life-force from a robot. That turns her into some kind of cyborg, with wires and metal parts visible under her skin. She swears revenge on the ministry for this horrible disfigurement and torture.
Astro bursts into the gang's stronghold, battle ensues and Alyssa sacrifices herself to save her gang from an explosion that she caused. But wait, she's not really dead, so Astro kisses her to do the "healing touch" thing again and turns even more robot-like. Alyssa wakes up and "the kisses became more wild & frantic, breathless, needy, hungry." Eww... Soon Astro and Alyssa are having a full-blown make-out session, Alyssa begs Astro to "take her", he flies away with her to his house and...Okay, I'm gonna be sick here.
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
"Alright then lets get down to business," I said addressing the room, "I suppose you're all wondering why you're here. You are here because we need your explosives, & lots of 'em. Our goal is to destroy the Ministry of Science."
Immediately shouts of protest ran up, many of the leaders either were robots, or had many robot members.
"Let me explain before you say no. First, I have nothing against robots; I have a few that are apart of my gang as well, & second, we are only going to destroy the building so that they are forced to move elsewhere." I paused & waited for more protest. (Yeah, because robots don't get repairs, maintenance and fuel from the Ministry. It's not like there's dozen of innocent robots (and humans) going around this building that would get hurt in the event of an attack. No, robots are like squirrels, cut down their tree and they'll just move on to the next. )
"Why do you want to destroy them?" said a leader in the middle of the table.
"Since this is a dangerous area, they are forced to create more advanced police bots, so we are being more restricted. (Or maybe they are building more police bots because there's a street gang running around packing guns and high explosives?) As you know, I am a very powerful mutant, the Ministry wants to use my powers for their own purpose, they went so far as to send Astro Boy after me," many leaders gasped & a few robots jumped out of their seats, but I waved them quiet.
"He captured me when I was fatally wounded. That stupid doctor told him to touch my skin so I could absorb his life force. This was the result." I opened my arms wide so they would know what was the cause for the new look. (of course she doesn't mentionned that they saved her life despite the nasty side effect. You'd rather be dead than ugly)
"Therefore, I wish that you would help me in this quest of destruction. Will you help?" I asked, my voice ringing off the clean white walls.
Many of the leaders raised their hands, & a lot of them were robots themselves; in the end, only two leaders didn't raise their hands.
"Thank you, you have no idea how much this means to me." (Aww, little princess wants to commit a terrorist act, how cute!) I thanked earnestly, then switching to command mode I said, "Alright, Lindsay I want all your TNT in the meeting hall A.S.A.P. got it? Jimi, & Don, all your C4 same place, Harry & Cici, dynamite please, also Slinger, Tong-tong, & Su Yong, I need all of your homemade boomers. Alright? You guys got all that? Good, Turg, show the no-sayers out please." I walked away from the table as everyone left to do their work.
I stepped out of the room, headed toward the mess hall when I heard the alarm sirens blaring through the building.
I sprinted to one of the balconies, & looked to see what was going on.
There he was, pounding at the door, anger on every line of his face, his legs shaking. Astro Boy.
I ran back inside & began shouting orders.
"Gunners on the roof NOW! Saber-fighters behind the front door! (aren't sabers a type of sword? The first line of defense when Astro breaks down the door is guys with swords? Against a robot?!) Women & children, into the spare rooms; c'mon people MOVE IT!" I shouted, running to my room for my classic long-sword.
I met Turg up on a balcony; his huge form comforting.
I raised my sword & gave a shout; the gunners lowered their guns in preperation. (They should be RAISING their guns in preparation for an attack, not lower them)
"Halt! What do you want with the members of the Harpies?" I called, stopping Astro's attempts at breaking down the door.
He looked up, joy on his face.
"Alyssa! There you are! C'mon, we need you at the Ministry, Dr. Elephant has been frantic looking for you!" he called up. (He's talking like she's late for her birthday party or something)
Turg looked at me sharply, & I glared back at him.
I turned around & gave an order, when I raised my hand the gunners would fire.
"Why would I EVER want to go to that hell?" I asked, then not waiting for an answer, I raised my hand. (Is she even gonna say what this "Hell" the Ministry put her through was? She seems pissed off at them for no reason)
The sound of gunfire split the air, along with a strong piercing scream.
I closed my fist & they stopped, Astro was lying on the ground, knocked out, but not with serious injuries. (Repeat after me: ASTRO IS A ROBOT! HE IS BULLETPROOF!)
"Damnit!" I shouted, jumping down & landing next to Astro.
I picked him up gingerly & kicked open the doors.
I took him to one of our 'prison' rooms, setting him down on the cot in a corner.
I took his hands in mine & concentrated, I sent some of my own life-force through the touch, directing it to heal him, when it had done its job it took most of it back.
"Wake up," I commanded. (You just ordered your gang to shoot at him, now you're healing him? make up your mind!)
Astro's eyes opened & he stared up at me before a look of the utmost joy covered his face.
"Alyssa! What happened? I was talking to you, then this weird pain came, & then I woke up here…" (Because Astro never got shot at in his long superhero career) he trailed off, playing with my hand.
I jerked it back, not caring about the look of hurt on his face; for the first time I actually noticed what he looked like, his black hair still shaped like uneven horns, his face no longer young & round, but sharp & angular, his chest (no shirt) finely muscled, & his legs long & lanky; altogether it was a nice look. (You are drooling at the sight of a robot made to resemble an 8-year old boy. He doesn't grow or change, he is a robot!!!)
"Yes, I brought you here, I stopped the gunners from doing any permanent damage so you could be easily healed. (Set the phasers to stun!) Now you shall not leave unless I let you go." I said coldly standing up & walking towards the door. (100 000 horsepower in this kid. He leaves whenever he wants)
"Wait, but are you gonna go to the Ministry with me?" he asked.
"Sort of," I replied stepping out of the room & striding to the great hall.
Everyone was assembled there, waiting for me to give the orders, by now, it was almost eleven, & we were about to leave for the attack.
The huge glass building loomed before us, only a few of its lights still on.
The explosives laid at my feet, waiting.
Everyone was waiting for my order, the order to destroy the Ministry.
I held my hand up & the bombs rose into the air, I snapped my fingers & they lit, then with a massive heave I threw them at the wretched building, instantly throwing up a shield around everyone against the explosion.
The sound nearly knocked me down, when the actual fire hit I was ready for it. I only staggered a few steps back, but I could feel my grip slipping.
"Everyone! I need you all to run as fast as you can! I can't hold the full force of it back! Go now!" I shouted, being forced back a few more steps.
They hesitated, not wanting to leave me, "I DON'T WANT ANYONE TO BE KILLED! RUN NOW!" I screamed, forcing everyone back with my mind. Only Turg stayed stubbornly at my side.
"Princess, I don't want to leave you!"
"You must! It is the only way! If you don't, then I will never forgive myself. Please, you must." I insisted, shoving him back a few steps.
"As you wish, so it shall be," he said brokenly.
I felt him sprint off, & when I was sure that he was out of reach, I slowly let down the shield. (if you could detonate the explosives from a distance, why did you need to have the whole gang and yourself standing inside the blast radius? Oh yeah, typical Sue heroic sacrifice and all that crap.)
Pain, searing pain through my body, fire licking my limbs, but still they are movable… lava pulsing through my veins, screaming at my heart to stop, then, hands, soft & cool against the searing heat, who-?
"ALYSSA! NO!"
(YES! SUE GOES BOOM! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!)
EDIT: Sorry, forgot the cut.