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Story Or Series Title: Freak ( www.fanfiction.net/s/575443/1/Freak )
Fandom:X-Men Evolution
Culprit Author's Name: Slytherin-By-Heart ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/122916/Slytherin_By_Heart )
Full Name (plus titles if any): Dixon Hayes aka Hex
Full Species(es): Human/Mutant/ Thing
Hair Color (include adjectives): "dark crimson hair "
Eye Color (include adjectives): "azure-colored eyes "
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None I saw
Special Possessions (if any): Clothing, cds, typical teenage runaway stuff
Annoying Origin: Never said, likey Bayvi\lle or maybe the 7th layer of Hell
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: The professor's neice, Pietro's girlfriend, Evan's crush
Annoying Special Abilities: Can control the weather
Other Annoying Traits: Everyone falls in love with her within two days
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
He hesitated only a moment. "I just- I wanted to tell to- I love you and I was afraid I was going to lose you this afternoon." He felt little relief now that he'd said it. He was afraid Dixion didn't feel the same way.
Dixion's face didn't change at all. It stayed calm and unemotional. The tears had dried from her eyes, and face. "Pietro, you don't know the pain I went through, worrying about you and everybody else." She moved arm's length from Pietro, studying his face. 'He's dead serious she thought, I can't believe it. ' Her heart leaped up into her throat. "Is this why you all stayed here? I know you and the guys aren't comfortable here, but you stayed anyway, just to make sure I was ok?" Dixion closed her eyes in thought, hugging herself.
Pietro didn't move. He didn't speak. He found himself holding his breath. He forced himself to let it out slowly. He was afraid he'd upset Dixion by telling her his feelings, and didn't want to make it worse. 'Way to go Pietro, called a voice in his head. You screw up every chance you get with a girl you really like.' Pietro hung his head. His self-anger grew, smoldering under the surface.
Dixion looked over at Pietro. His eyes were unfocused, and fiery. She wanted to console him, comfort him. When she laid a hand on his arm, he started, turning his fiery glare on her. She flinched inwardly but won't back down. Before she could stop herself, she pulled him closer and kissed him.
The strain, anger and fear melted away from the two teens in the one embrace. Slowly Pietro wrapped his arms around Dixion, pulling her closer. Both took comfort from the warmth coming from each other. Dixion pulled only a breath away to look at Pietro. His eyes were now clear but held uncertainty and worry.
"Pietro, I love you and I'm glad you feel the same. I was afraid I was going to have to love you from afar forever." Dixion consoled, as if reading his mind.
Pietro smiled slightly, his eyes cleared and he closed the small gap between them for another heated kiss. ************************************************************************ Same as before.
Fandom:X-Men Evolution
Culprit Author's Name: Slytherin-By-Heart ( http://www.fanfiction.net/u/122916/Slytherin_By_Heart )
Full Name (plus titles if any): Dixon Hayes aka Hex
Full Species(es): Human/Mutant/ Thing
Hair Color (include adjectives): "dark crimson hair "
Eye Color (include adjectives): "azure-colored eyes "
Unusual Markings/Colorations: None I saw
Special Possessions (if any): Clothing, cds, typical teenage runaway stuff
Annoying Origin: Never said, likey Bayvi\lle or maybe the 7th layer of Hell
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: The professor's neice, Pietro's girlfriend, Evan's crush
Annoying Special Abilities: Can control the weather
Other Annoying Traits: Everyone falls in love with her within two days
Please include a small sample of the worst of this story:
He hesitated only a moment. "I just- I wanted to tell to- I love you and I was afraid I was going to lose you this afternoon." He felt little relief now that he'd said it. He was afraid Dixion didn't feel the same way.
Dixion's face didn't change at all. It stayed calm and unemotional. The tears had dried from her eyes, and face. "Pietro, you don't know the pain I went through, worrying about you and everybody else." She moved arm's length from Pietro, studying his face. 'He's dead serious she thought, I can't believe it. ' Her heart leaped up into her throat. "Is this why you all stayed here? I know you and the guys aren't comfortable here, but you stayed anyway, just to make sure I was ok?" Dixion closed her eyes in thought, hugging herself.
Pietro didn't move. He didn't speak. He found himself holding his breath. He forced himself to let it out slowly. He was afraid he'd upset Dixion by telling her his feelings, and didn't want to make it worse. 'Way to go Pietro, called a voice in his head. You screw up every chance you get with a girl you really like.' Pietro hung his head. His self-anger grew, smoldering under the surface.
Dixion looked over at Pietro. His eyes were unfocused, and fiery. She wanted to console him, comfort him. When she laid a hand on his arm, he started, turning his fiery glare on her. She flinched inwardly but won't back down. Before she could stop herself, she pulled him closer and kissed him.
The strain, anger and fear melted away from the two teens in the one embrace. Slowly Pietro wrapped his arms around Dixion, pulling her closer. Both took comfort from the warmth coming from each other. Dixion pulled only a breath away to look at Pietro. His eyes were now clear but held uncertainty and worry.
"Pietro, I love you and I'm glad you feel the same. I was afraid I was going to have to love you from afar forever." Dixion consoled, as if reading his mind.
Pietro smiled slightly, his eyes cleared and he closed the small gap between them for another heated kiss. ************************************************************************ Same as before.