More sues than you can shake a stick at.
Hey y'all me again! I am a huge fan of the X-Men series usually no matter how you shake it and bake it. I am one of the few Toad fans and I am also a fan of Quicksilver. This Sue Author managed to really sorta ruin the two for me in this fic but not permenantly thank god. Even so the basic jist since I could not post the whole thing is that this girl sees them do their evil deeds, and they take her captive or something like that, mwuaha. Just an excuse for the Sue Author to show her amazing skills x-_-
I am only posting chunks of the worst so if it seems to skip around that is why.
Story Or Series Title: Witness
Fandom: X-Men Evolution (I hate sue authors so much)
Culprit Author's Name: Ginevra
Full Name (plus titles if any): Marissa (sounds preppy)
Full Species(es): Human!
Hair Color (include adjectives): Red AND black *eyeroll*
Eye Color (include adjectives): Never said
Unusual Markings/Colorations: The hair is about all I can see.
Special Possessions (if any): Well if you count the fact she can turn most of the cast of Evolution OOC then yeah.
Annoying Origin: Someone's loins
Annoying Connections To Canon Characters: Well she somehow befriends Evolution-verse Wanda. Gets with most of them I think or just one...might just be Toad.
Annoying Special Abilities: Makes Pietro OOC! That irks me highly.
Other Annoying Traits: Being alive?
Pietro had had the marvelous idea to raid the electronics repair shop in the older part of town on the theory that the place would have outdated security. He wanted a new TV and Fred had gummed up the DVD player with Twinkie crumbs. Lance was nowhere to be found and Wanda was too busy doing whatever it was she did in her room. So of course, Todd got dragged along for the ride.
Turned out Pietro was wrong about the security, as soon as Fred smashed open the service door, an ear piercing alarm echoed through the alleyway. Pietro dashed inside to carry out a TV and DVD player and piled them in Lance’s jeep. Todd hopped back and forth down the alley, supposedly watching for trouble. Really, he was nervous and couldn’t stay still. Pietro raid an electronics shop? How juvenile does this girl think he is anyway?
As he approached a dumpster, a ragged figure suddenly darted past him, heading towards the open end of the alleyway. He shouted in surprise - actually fright - the figure had nearly bowled him over.
“Hey! Get her!” Fred stepped out into the alleyway and the figure slammed into him, then fell to the ground, dropping a duffel bag in the process. She was dressed in a torn denim jacket and jeans and her hair was a wild mass of red and black. Fred pulled her upright by the front of her jacket. The telltale Sue hair that is complete with random colors all over! I hate it.
“Let me go!” The girl kicked at him to no effect.
“What’s this?” Pietro stopped his shopping spree and looked at Fred’s catch. It's a sue! Burn it! Or feed her to Sabretooth.
“Dunno. Toad said to get her.” The sound of sirens reached their ears. The girl kicked again and Fred ignored her as she continued to shout.
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“Shit!” He leapt up from the bed. “I’m not doing anything!” He fumbled with his pants.
“I…wasn’t…You just want me to cut you loose.” He sat back down on the edge of the bed. Kill her please actually.
“Actually…it’s kind of kinkier if you don’t.” He could see her biting her lip and her legs moved against one another restlessly. “Come on.” O. O Oh god!
“Are you serious?” Todd turned towards her. “I don’t get you.” Me neither Todd.
“You have no idea how hot it made me when I felt you jacking off. I can’t even touch myself!” She tugged at the cuffs in frustration. jggsgjsgjslkg waaaaaaaah? Someone actually WANTS him?
“I’m not cutting you loose.” Todd stretched out beside her and reached out a tentative hand to stroke her belly, sliding his hand upwards under her shirt. He kneaded her small breast experimentally and when he brushed the nipple with his thumb she gasped. Bolder now he began to explore her upper body with both hands, pushing her shirt up so he could see her breasts. She moved under his hands and made little noises of frustration. Start of ickers lemon scene.
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“I um…want to try something. I’ll stop if you don’t like it.” Todd licked his lips nervously, then extended his tongue to flick against the little nodule of flesh. Marissa squealed and bucked her hips. He continued his efforts for a few moments, and then replaced his tongue with his fingers. He extended his tongue again and began to lap at her entrance, exploring her folds with his tongue. He’d never tasted anything quite like it before, but it wasn’t unpleasant. She continued to writhe and moan, so he pushed farther, extending his tongue until it entered her. Holy tap dancing jesus on a crutch. I never thought in all my years I'd find someone who wanted to put an OC with TOAD. I mean Lance sure have at him ...but Toad?
“Ooohh! More.”
Todd pressed more of his tongue into her, letting it travel deeper and deeper inside. As it did, her moans became louder and louder. He began to move it in and out and rolled it around experimentally. The effect on her was electric. Shock her so much she'll die please.
“Oh my God. OhGodOhGodOhGod!” Her hips writhed frantically, then suddenly her whole body went rigid and she screamed. Todd withdrew his tongue suddenly and she collapsed back on the bed.
“What did you do to me?” She panted.
“I…uh…used my tongue.” He licked his lips thoughtfully. “Do you want me to stop?” YES PLEASE STOP. By the way folks I stopped here as to not disgust you further incase you know who Toad is XD.