Freaking Fruits Basket Sue

[haruki_emishi]

Story Or Series Title: The Sohma Puzzle
Fandom: Fruits Basket (Yep saw this coming
Culprit Author's Name: Uroki Avalon

Full Name (plus titles if any: Tamiko is her name and ...is that a real Japanese name? It might be but I am not sure.
Full Species(es): Human I guess
Hair Color (include adjectives): I never saw if they gave her a hair color or not.
Eye

Comments

[cokeisyummeh]

Why? Whhhyyyyy? I remember Fruits Basket from my early teen years. And now I feel that a part of my childhood just got raped.

I have been to Tokyo. And I saw no farms at all. Not one. Maybe I just wasn't special enough to see it. BAWWW.

...Seriously? HaruxOC? Oh balls. I think a part of me died inside. It couldn't actually happen. Unless the Mary Sue is into bestiality or something. I don't know, but my experience says it's kind of hard to have sex without embracing the other person. Unless you're really, really flexible or something.

[alswaiter]

The giant parks in Tokyo are nice though. Kinda odd to have parks like that in the middle of the city, but I really liked it.

[haruki_emishi]

New York has central park! But that place is full of hobos and people who mug you XD.

Yeah I hate when Mary Sue authors forget the LAYOUT OF A CITY. I would appreciate the simple kindness of doing research first. I mean hell I am no expert on Toyko (never been), and even I know that you cannot have a farm in a megalopolis! Just sayin...

[alswaiter]

But I don't live in NY, so I still think it's a bit odd, but I know some large cities have parks for those who need some green.

But yes. Research on a city that you're writing about is a must. But a lot of young writers now are lazy and actual research is beyond them.

[puddinchan]

Tami = nation
Ko = child

Nation child? ...What? (I looked it up quickly.)

[haruki_emishi]

Weeeeird....makes no sense X_X.