Demon's Lexicon, chapter one

[lettered]

For anyone who didn't see, the first chapter of SRB's book is now public, here.

Thoughts?

Comments

[laliandra]

THis is a version of what I left as a comment to Sarah, with a few things about what she replied as well

[thegreatmissjj]

"Crack shot," "sensitive," "intellectual," and "bookish" pretty much seal the deal for me on character love. (Well, maybe not sensitive. Sometimes I like insensitive berks.) I fully expected to fall hard for Alan when Sarah was revealing vague things about the book, but no, I find myself being hopelessly charmed by Nick. He's an insensitive berk who cares for his brother deeply and really, it's that gooey marshmallow center that's making me all fluttery. Not that I don't love Alan because I do. (I like a man in glasses

[wingstodust]

Oh dear, I fear reading this book will be like playing the Dating Game from the 60s.

lmao yes, I can feel this happening already. I'm afraid I'm going for Bachelor Number Three though... *wibbles in her minority corner*

[lokifan]

Me too! Absolutely! I like all three, but all my favourite lines were his. And I loved that Nick introduced him as James but his sister called him "Jamie".

[wingstodust]

=OO JAMIE FAN!!! *high fives* it`s just, the way he talks, it`s music to my ears ♥♥♥