I am, awake, the only one awake

Jan 02, 2011 10:37

Title: I am, awake, the only one awake
Pairing: Eduardo Saverin/Mark Zuckerberg
Rating: R
Disclaimer: This is not real, this never happened. I don't know them and this is all fiction. Made up stuff.
Author's Notes: This was the fic I wrote for Yuletide and for ems. Takes place after the movie and within movie canon. The book I refer to throughout the ( Read more... )

! (♥): mark/eduardo, (creative): fic

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anysomething January 3 2011, 06:38:54 UTC
This is absolutely beautiful. Really, really, really fantastic. My heart was breaking for them the whole time. ahhhhhh so much good.

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parka_girl January 4 2011, 00:00:08 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked it. It was a bit heartbreaking to write, too.

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learnthemusic January 7 2011, 03:57:24 UTC
Your story makes me want to kill people and then resuscitate them. Not in a bad way, though murder is obviously bad. It's frustrating to read these characters how you wrote them because I can't decide who is more justified - and I can barely decide that in the fandom in general!

But please take that as a compliment because your writing is fantastic. I love second-person narratives - and your switching of perspectives is just so VERY intriguing. The whole thing is, really. I can't find what I want to say, there's that much perfection going on.

There are stories that leave me with a feeling that the conflict goes unresolved - but not this one. And you resolve the conflict so well in such a short (in comparison to other stories that seem to drag it out forever) amount of words that I can't even begin to gush about everything.

Thank you so much for writing this!

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parka_girl January 10 2011, 00:46:21 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you like second person ones, as I seem to be addicted to them.

I'm glad you liked it! I found it was hard to decide how to end it, because part of me wanted a happy ending, but at the same time, I realized that wasn't quite the fic I was writing. Instead, it was going to be something bittersweet and almost happy. Again, I'm so so glad you liked it! :D

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leopardchic79 January 8 2011, 03:53:19 UTC
This is amazingly heartbreaking. *sniffle*

Really loved it!!

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parka_girl January 10 2011, 00:44:51 UTC
I'm glad that you liked it so much! Thanks :D

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