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marinliliz

My Unexpected Valentine

Feb 14, 2008 18:19

[Title]: My Unexpected Valentine
[Characters]: Abarai Renji, Kuchiki Byakuya and Zaraki Kenpachi.
[Summary]: Byakuya receives an unexpected visit from Kenpachi.
[Word Count]: 395
[Finished]: 10.February.2008
[Beta]: Not beta-read
[Warnings]: Please be warned of the complete crack and OOCness of this drabble.
[Notes]: Refer to You Can Kiss... for info ( Read more... )

[my_valentine], p:byakuya/renji, !bleach, p:byakuya/zaraki, #fanfiction

Comments 25

nnoi February 14 2008, 20:51:14 UTC

*Gigglesnorts* That was sooo funny I can sooo see Zaraki having to rip the candies from pinkie and then expecting a kiss and even begin so bold as to ask for it and I love that Bya is the WTF white day LOL

marinliliz February 15 2008, 14:38:27 UTC

I have it in my mind that Yachiru is completely addicted to sweets hence me mentioning her, sugar-high, every time possible.>.< As for Zaraki, bolder than that you can't get, so asking for a kiss in return for the present is piece of cake (don't let pinkie get thisXD) to him. Byakuya is being his diplomatic self and trying to cope with Zaraki's advances and Renji's fury and completely lost for words in the process.

annieroo2 February 15 2008, 04:37:11 UTC

Holy Crap! I laughed so hard my husband had to shush me so I didn't wake the kids. Damn it that was fricking hysterical. I adored how polite and logical Byakuya sounded about the whole thing, when you know damn well he was terrified on the inside. :D

Renji better get a move on, he only has a month to set up Kenpachi with someone to keep him from sniffing around Byakuya and becoming competition. ;D

This was awesome. Your cracktasticness knows no bounds. XD

marinliliz February 15 2008, 14:48:47 UTC

This is what I mean when I say my writings have an influence on others; in your case it seems to disrupt the family life. Hope it didn't wake the your kids^_^'

Byakuya is trying to control the situation while completely clueless. Renji playing cupid sounds really cool. And there you go again filling my mind with ideas for fics, grrrr, I need 48 hour days!

annieroo2 February 16 2008, 06:33:59 UTC

Nah! My kids are pretty heavy sleepers. Good for us!! ;)

Sorry! Sorry! I don't mean to to fill your head with random shit of mine. Honest!!

marinliliz February 16 2008, 22:45:33 UTC

*wipes forehead in relieve* And it's good to have all these stories flowing around, I just wish I had time to write them all.

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yawns_widely February 15 2008, 20:30:00 UTC

I'm so glad I know what white days is :) and Kenpachi romantically involved with any male is always good to read...

Yachiru eating the chocolates...sweet.

marinliliz February 15 2008, 21:07:08 UTC

LOL; maybe you should explain Byakuya, he seemed really confused.

Yachiru is the sweetest, craziest thing:]

yawns_widely February 15 2008, 21:08:25 UTC

Oh I will....I talk to Byakuya all the time.

marinliliz February 15 2008, 21:11:09 UTC

rotflmao. He should come up with a way of returning Kenpachi's box of chocolates.

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madammina February 15 2008, 23:19:41 UTC

Oh my head....that was lol funny. I scared the cat with my outburst.....and she has sharp claws. xD

marinliliz February 16 2008, 22:47:18 UTC

I seem to be disrupting people's real life with my crazy drabbles, in a way that's so cool.XD *offers disinfectant for the scratches*

p_nd February 16 2008, 03:28:30 UTC

Oh dear, that was good one. Just what I needed to complete my day. I love how everything you write seems to head back to your Mistletoe Kisses.

And Renji, I'm sure Byakuya just loves the jealousy...because I know I would.

marinliliz February 16 2008, 22:51:43 UTC

I felt there were some unfinished business left from the Mistletoe series and I just couldn't leave them alone. I well controlled jealousy is so heart-warming. *sighs*