Make them do it - Comment fest!

Mar 04, 2011 08:51

So what are you guys up for today? A little comment fest type thing?

The other day Hermette suggested a cliché fest based on the How to make Merlin/Arthur do it list. To which I said: YES! (because moar porn! *grabby hands*). Thank you to ella_bane, who agreed to be my co-host in this little fest. <3


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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 4 2011, 17:54:00 UTC
[Part 2/2]

"I'm so tight that you'd barely last five minutes," Scorpius purred, leaning close to whisper the words against Harry's mouth. "I've already prepared myself, so I'm slick and ready, but I didn't bother with any stretching-I want you to feel everything."

Harry's glasses began to fog up. Scorpius' breath was hot and raw and the scent of his expensive cologne was intoxicating. Worse, Harry now had the mental image of just what Scorpius' pretty arse must look like under those pants-slickened and ready for a throbbing prick to pierce it, stretch it, open it wide. Suddenly, Harry was all too aware of the sweat beading at the back of his neck.

"I can bend myself into the most delicious positions you could ever imagine," Scorpius continued, beginning to rock his body against Harry's, pressing an insistent erection against Harry's stomach, separated from him only by the nearly sheer material of his green briefs.

Still, the idea of bending Scorpius into odd positions like some sort of contortionist at a carnival made Harry laugh. "Scorpius, come on, get up and let me get back to wo-"

Harry's voice dried out in his throat as he watched Scorpius lean back. One hand braced against Harry's bicep, Scorpius leaned and leaned and leaned until he looked so arched that Harry could probably snap his spine if he touched him the wrong way. Only when Scorpius was arched back, his shoulders resting delicately atop Harry's desk, did he stop. His body was a perfect arch, and as Harry raked his gaze over the length of his pale torso, he devoured the sight of Scorpius' stomach muscles shifting when he breathed, his chest flat and rising, his hips the only thing connected to Harry as that bracing hand dropped away submissively. It left Harry in full control of the position, in full control of Scorpius.

He imagined ripping Scorpius' pants off, tearing his own zipper to release his prick, and entering Scorpius without warning, forcing him to remain in this position until Harry was through with him. The thought alone sent a ripple of excitement through his body. It had been years since Harry had fucked anybody, having been despairingly celibate since his divorce, and now he had to wonder, what was holding him back?

Scorpius held the position for a long time and then gingerly flowed into an upright sitting position, still in Harry's lap and looking even more limber than before, if that was at all possible. He fixed Harry with a knowing gaze and ran both hands through his hair. He opened his mouth to speak, beautiful pink lips parted to tease, but Harry beat him to it.

"I suppose I ought to see what you can do, then," Harry said, trying not to lose it. It was a mistake, he was sure, but all the reasons why it would never work were sent flying at the look Scorpius gave him and the guttural grunt that slipped off his tongue as it slid demandingly into Harry's mouth.

This time, Harry didn't stop him.

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it suzyblack March 4 2011, 18:33:23 UTC
OH YES =D

Love Scorpius =D

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 4 2011, 21:56:42 UTC
*G* Thanks! Don't we all just adore him?

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it meglw0228 March 4 2011, 18:40:00 UTC
OMFG! This is so fing good!!!!!!!!

At first I had only scrolled to the end of part 1, and didn't see part 2 and I was about to scream that there had to be more when I scrolled further to reply and saw part 2! THANK YOU for the part 2 lol!

I LOVE your characterization of Harry in this... holy hell your description of him in the beginning...I wish I could write that well!

And the hints of d/s...nngh, that was delicious!!!! Damn you Harry, you should have just fucked him like that!!!

There are no words to describe how fing great this was!

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 4 2011, 21:58:22 UTC
Thank you so much :D! And don't worry, there's plenty of fucking that comes later. ...or that makes Scorpius come later. Idk, but there's fucking for sure.

Glad you enjoyed!

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it teas_me March 4 2011, 19:15:46 UTC
See, this is exactly why I love you. Your characterization of Harry when confronted with something like this is really, really, REALLY hot. The conflict in his head before he finally caves and dives in head first...

And OMG Scorpius is sooo hot in that submissive pose.

*dies and is ded*

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 4 2011, 22:09:18 UTC
*glomps* I'm so glad!! Because what you mentioned (that inner struggle before diving in head first) is exactly the kind of thing I looooove writing. Sometimes, I fear I use that line too much, but it's just so delicious. And I can't see Harry acting any other way if presented with such a prize. ;D

And yessss, Scorp bent backwards for Harry? Nnng.

<3333 thank youuuu

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 4 2011, 22:10:39 UTC
heeee, ty!! <33

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it marguerite_26 March 4 2011, 19:45:21 UTC
If you'll excuse me... I need to be alone rn.

UNF!

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 4 2011, 22:11:41 UTC
LOL@ your icon.

And yes. Take all the time you need. *G* Thanks!

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it winterstorrm March 4 2011, 20:16:08 UTC
Yes, very important that Harry makes sure Scorpius is not just a false promise.

Very. Hot.

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 6 2011, 02:50:22 UTC
haha, it IS so important, isn't it? Scientific study, almost. ;) Thanks!!

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it brinimc March 4 2011, 20:56:01 UTC
*Whimpers*

Guh, I love Scorpius so so much. :D

I wish this was longer!!! XD

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it snarkyscorp March 6 2011, 02:51:09 UTC
Awww, thank you babe!! Scorpius is such a sexy, insistent little thing, isn't he? How Harry resists for even a few minutes is beyond me. ;D

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Re: Harry/Scorpius - Harry not believing Scorpius is as amazing in bed as he claims makes them do it nursedarry March 4 2011, 21:29:30 UTC
THAT'S my boy!

Love Harry's glasses fogging up!!!

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