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Make them do it - Comment fest!

Mar 04, 2011 08:51

So what are you guys up for today? A little comment fest type thing?

The other day Hermette suggested a cliché fest based on the How to make Merlin/Arthur do it list. To which I said: YES! (because moar porn! *grabby hands*). Thank you to ella_bane, who agreed to be my co-host in this little fest. <3

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For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 halesmoon March 4 2011, 17:28:30 UTC

Arthur and Merlin collapsed back on to the bed, Arthur landing on top of his manservant.

"You're heavy," Merlin complained, his voice muffled.

Arthur rolled off of him and scanned the room.

Merlin noticed was he was doing. "No," he said. "We're done. I'm not innocent anymore, so we can stop."

Arthur considered him for a moment. "But you might still be. I don't know, you were very innocent Merlin which means we need to devote all of today to making sure that we have saved the kingdom."

Merlin sputtered. "But, we've done it lying down, standing up, kneeling, against the wall, in the tub, over by the fireplace, on the floor, on the table, in your chair, over your chair...I think I've been thoroughly deflowered."

Arthur thought for a moment. "We haven't done it by the window," he said, before pushing Merlin against the pane of glass. The window looked out over the courtyard, where people were milling about, going on with their normal business.

"Arthur," Merlin squeaked, "people will see."

"You're blushing. You're obviously still innocent."

"No, I'm not. Arthur, don't- oh, oh" Merlin was cut off as Arthur entered his loosened hole in one quick, deep thrust.

Arthur used one hand to push against Merlin's back, making him bend forward and brace himself against the window. "I'm going to make you scream," he said huskily.

Merlin moaned as Arthur began to pound into him, each thrust driving him forward. He reached one hand down to wrap around himself, but Arthur knocked it away.

"No, Merlin. Not yet," he said, pulling all the way out until only the head of his cock was in Merlin, the thrusting forward hard enough that Merlin stumbled. He had braced one hand against the window, and the forward momentum had pushed the window forward. It swung open, and Merlin knew anyone who looked up would have a clear view of him being thoroughly fucked.

When Merlin thought he could take it no longer, he began to beg. "Please please please," he moaned in time to Arthur's thrust, "Arthur."

"Scream my name."

Merlin bit his lip, groaning as Arthur's thrusts quickened and he felt his orgasm approaching.

Arthur must have felt his body shuddering because he reached down and wrapped a hand around the base of his cock.

"No!" Merlin cried. "Please! Arthur!"

"Scream."

"Arthur!"

"Louder."

"ARTHUR!"

"I said louder Merlin. Louder!" He punctuated each command with a harsh thrust.

"ARTHUR!"

Arthur loosened his hand, stroking Merlin to a quick completion. Merlin felt warmth spread through him as Arthur followed him over.

They lay there for a moment, breathing hard, their upper bodies hanging halfway out the window. When Merlin had recovered himself enough to stand, he raised his eyes. Uther and Gaius were standing in the courtyard looking up at them, and damn it all if Uther didn't look proud of his son in that moment.

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 marguerite_26 March 4 2011, 17:32:21 UTC

CAN'T BREATHE... LAUGHING... TOO... HARD... ahahahaahah!!!

That was a brilliant sequel. VERY VERY THOROUGH!!! With bonus witnesses!!!

YAY!!! Arthur loves Camelot SO FUCKING MUCH. :DDDD

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 halesmoon March 4 2011, 17:35:01 UTC

The things you make me write Maggie. This is what happens when I'm sleep deprived, overly caffeinated, and procrastinating.

I'M SO GLAD YOU LIKED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 marguerite_26 March 4 2011, 17:37:08 UTC

Uther, the proud father, was just too hilarious. :DDDD

I understand you, Uther. I'm so proud that I enabled this awesome ficlet. We are both awesome for encouraging Arthur in his most honourable pursuits. \o/

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 halesmoon March 4 2011, 18:33:28 UTC

Can we post these on our LJs when the fest is over? Or do you want the comment fics to stay here?

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 magog_83 March 4 2011, 17:50:03 UTC

AHAHAHAHAHA

PERFECT SEQUEL!!! Oooooh god, poor Merlin, how embarrassing!

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 myashke March 4 2011, 17:55:26 UTC

Ha ha! That's awesomesauce! Arthur's just so conscientious, isn't he?

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 halesmoon March 4 2011, 18:00:24 UTC

He's a very good prince ;-)

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 kajmere March 4 2011, 18:03:18 UTC

DEAD. I AM DEAD *falls over dead*

"You're blushing. You're obviously still innocent."
OBVIOUSLY.

I can just picture the smug smile on Uthers face, and Giaus's raised eyebrow as they peer up at the boys.

Fan-FUCKING-tastic!

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 halesmoon March 4 2011, 18:11:16 UTC

*revives you*

I'm so happy everyone liked this!

It was my first comment fic ever.

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 kajmere March 4 2011, 18:42:08 UTC

Well you done good in my books! *nods*
I hope to see more commentfics from you :D

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 lunadeath02 March 4 2011, 18:14:20 UTC

Thank you so much for this! I'm beaming! And it was hot to boot! This is just what I needed today. :)

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 halesmoon March 4 2011, 18:31:32 UTC

THANK YOU!!!!!!!

So happy I could make someone's day better :D

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 natanilik March 4 2011, 18:30:17 UTC

HAHAHA! Hot and hilarious at the same time!

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 halesmoon March 4 2011, 18:31:51 UTC

I'm glad you liked it <33333

Re: For Maggie, who wanted a sequel: Uther makes them do it! Part 2 tracy7307 March 5 2011, 00:55:37 UTC

AHAHHAHAHA *flail* I LOVED IT! Soooo funny, cute, HOT and very thorough of Arthur!

And...
When Merlin had recovered himself enough to stand, he raised his eyes. Uther and Gaius were standing in the courtyard looking up at them, and damn it all if Uther didn't look proud of his son in that moment.
I can completely envision Gaius clapping slowly, joined by Uther, until the ENTIRE EFFING COURTYARD is filled with applause, HAHHA job well done!

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